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Air of the Beast
By freudian-slip
Lost in poetic blissful distraction,
keyboard tapping-
my friend the white russian
sitting beside me,
faithfully.
as does he
His name is Noah.
mixed breed of shepherd and rot,
loyal protector and confidante
who anyone would swear,
wears a smile-
as he releases a noxious smog that would permeate the paint.
Good God
I'm
going
to
faint.
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© 2008 the-rapist
Comments on "Air of the Beast"
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A former member wrote:
I like it :) it's short and to the point. I've noticed many people use their own style of writing, instead of following what every poet does. And I like the end xD funny xD
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, freudian-slip
(236)
wrote:
*paint still dripping* you should see the smile on Noah's face :o)
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, Syringe
(51) wrote:
i like the 6th line. it makes me smile
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Haha
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, freudian-slip
(236) wrote:
Na- if I'm so damn genius, how come I can't make a child smart enough not to feed the dog MEXICAN FUCKING PIZZA??? *rolling in fart air and laughter*
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
LMAO!! in caps none the less. i so know this feeling. kinda makes you want to put them out of your misery huh? whatever you do don't lite a cigarette, you might blow the place up. this was great. you are a genius. *cheers* ~tNa
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A former member wrote:
this was excellent. I loved it.
~ hdb.
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