4000 milligrams

By freudian-slip

Thats the max dose he said
chin up and lighthearted
and of course he is
his supply is never shorthanded
never seen him shake with chills so bad
the idea
of a bullet to the head
instantly refreshes your soul
but what he can't know is that is the amount i could swallow in four hours
on a good day
good doctor
just give me my fucking prescription

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Copyright 2012 freudian-slip
Published on Thursday, November 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Sketso On Monday, December 9, 2013, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    Egads... scary in it's almost whimsical insight into a very non-whimsical beast.

  • eidos On Saturday, November 10, 2012, eidos (40)By person wrote:

    I relate all too well. Too well to read this again. Wonderfully written.

  • Nehema On Friday, November 9, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Not many pains compare with those of withdrawals, " a bullet to the head instantly refreshes your soul" I think sums it up brilliantly - XXOO Scholar

  • Northstar On Thursday, November 8, 2012, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    i love it when thoughts escape as poetry...this seems to be so with this...i very much feel this piece and enjoyed it

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