Exposure to the elements
By freudian-slip
Sand washed,
salty lips,
project hindsight-
yet my sun streaked eyes will never see such glorious daylight.
Wind burned skin,
still reddened with the aftermath of unexpected storms,
inadequate life preparation...
continuously seeking warmth,
from paper- thin
soulless blankets.
Snow,
seeping below my collar,
chilling skin- deep bones that resemble spineless skeletons,
skating..
on ice much too thin for even a lightweight such as myself.
Unforgiving waves crash over me,
while the relentless undertow
pulls me under.
If only I could swim.
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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Sunday, March 16, 2008.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Exposure to the elements"
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A former member wrote:
such detailed writing.. I felt the words even more. loved this piece
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On Monday, March 17, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
what visuals. interesting subject. i like it. i love your mind. very nice write. ~ta~
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A former member wrote:
This is a really unique piece. Lydd