Exposure to the elements

By freudian-slip

Sand washed,
salty lips,
project hindsight-

yet my sun streaked eyes will never see such glorious daylight.

Wind burned skin,
still reddened with the aftermath of unexpected storms,
inadequate life preparation...

continuously seeking warmth,
from paper- thin
soulless blankets.

Snow,
seeping below my collar,
chilling skin- deep bones that resemble spineless skeletons,

skating..

on ice much too thin for even a lightweight such as myself.

Unforgiving waves crash over me,

while the relentless undertow
pulls me under.

If only I could swim.


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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Sunday, March 16, 2008.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: such detailed writing.. I felt the words even more. loved this piece

  • denver nitze On Monday, March 17, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    what visuals. interesting subject. i like it. i love your mind. very nice write. ~ta~

  • A former member wrote: This is a really unique piece. Lydd

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