Adoration part two
By freudian-slip
"We can change ten thousand times in the blink of an eye,
and still the only thing we worry about is how to screw things up."
(Love the Hard Way)
Adoration
the blessed curse of a true
undying love
meant to shake your fragile soul like a rag doll in the hands of a toddler
The seduction of your innermost fears
martini shaken
with imminent tears as you grab onto the ride of a lifetime
Your hand in mine
given infinite possibilities and trust never known before
Behind every open door
escapes the reality that your past experiences have held you prisoner
The breeze that catches your face
unexpectedly on a hot summers day
The kind of love
that shows you the way out of the darkest of rooms
when you are frightened of each unexpected noise
or danger that might soon be around the corner
of your mind
I am forever thankful for what I never thought I'd never find
I am not going to screw this one up
or am I
?
Comments on "Adoration part two"
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On Saturday, June 2, 2012, dalphon
(70) wrote:
sometimes I feel the effort to keep from screwing it up is dragging me down the path to ruin.... excellent work..
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2010, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Interesting piece, I like playful nature of it. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
goin over it and over and over it in your head,... by the time youve realitised your back to the same uncertainty,..the lack of trust[in ones self] that can lie under the surface of our skin,..sometimes we are our own worst enemy.
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On Tuesday, May 12, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
This was cleverly spun, I enjoyed it and then the ending was a twist. Well done.