drumsex/venice beach

By zanewill

monochrome dispatches of lost warrior dreams
kids skittering unaware of the ghosts of their fathers
switch-blade-lolly-pop
look at your hands in your dreams 2 make sure ur really dreaming
sometimes the parasomnia night creatures creep silently
slithering into the dreamscape until there is no escape
you awake
sweat dreanched sheets entwined soaking wet
drool, cum, blood, & sweat
salty like old pennies
I challenge all those who dream in technicolor-psychadaelic-swirling
multi-
5th dimensional exstacy?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
**************************THIS IS NOT A TEST******************************
I TRULY NEED TO KNOW WHO OUT THERE DREAMS IN
SURREALISTIC SCOPES OF INTELLECT
VISUAL DISTURBANCES/AUDIO COLOURED
DRUMSEX SYMPHONY
venice beach-socal-usa
sunset on sunday 10,000 voices beating in the wind & sound of the sea
transcendent beings evoked from the powerful majik of unity
re-
sounding from we to the sea
to the sky & the gods
re-
verberating back 7-Fold across the earth, the sea, the sky,
the cry inside the people bleeting drums & voices
not 2 ourselves
not 2 the world we live in
not 2 the atroscious lies % "cides" we've survived
BUT...
simply many spirits joined together with the rhythm & celebration of that
one
single sunset that we were all priviledged to
give a good
send-off to.

what more could one wish for??



















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© 2007 zanewill
Published on Thursday, February 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Frater Synth On Monday, October 18, 2010, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    That was a bit different but I like it :)

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, February 15, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This was the bomb!!! I love celebratory poetry and when it's done like this..my word...*bows*

  • A former member wrote: fucking trippy. i love venice beach. *faves*

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, February 15, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I could wish for nothing more! Fantastic! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Sin On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    i thought this was fabulous i will comment when i am in a less drunken state ~kristy

  • jack paper On Thursday, February 15, 2007, jack paper (121)By person wrote:

    so the hands thing really works? i'd kinda like to read this again.. in an altered state.. different but cool i like it

  • capt_funguy On Thursday, February 15, 2007, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    congrats man .. you strung together all the words necessary to achieve such a beautiful statement. i thrive on these split moment celebrations. you nailed this , and nailed it well ... funguy

  • zanewill On Thursday, February 15, 2007, zanewill (82)By person wrote:

    capt F-UR fan-fukin-tastic OR self!!


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