Strange Moon

By Stranger

Tonight, the moon seems somehow different
Pale, gray, hungry

We move as we always have:
First for the woman
and then for the man

We look to each other's eyes
for the lust, that, like the weight of the earth
has always pulled us together

But tonight,
the light of this moon
reveals in our eyes, children
lost, alone, needing approval

After we are finished
the night's cold breath punishes us
biting our flesh
as if to tell us:
Our love has become sin

But tonight,
as we lie beneath this strange moon
we feel, somehow, forgiven


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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Saturday, April 12, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very real. It's great .

  • A former member wrote: what makes this evencrazyer for me is the fact that my nickname is moon. and all of this is rue to me. i loves it. ^_^ great write

  • Serenity On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Beautiful work!

  • Sin On Monday, April 4, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    very serene and beautiful

  • Jonas On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    like the tender reminiscience of innocence as it beautifully impales a soul cold and stricken with the realities and banalities of life. beauteous. hi, there, by the way! long time no speaky! talk to you soon, i hope!

  • A former member wrote: Very nice. As JustMe said, it's calm and low. It gives me a feeling of tranquility. Very very nice.

  • CharlottesWeb On Saturday, May 17, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    BEAUTIFUL... low, calm... and very peaceful. I enjoyed this one much...thankyou for sharing it.~DW~

  • maddin foxxxy On Friday, May 2, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    another piece of artwork...my applause to you.

  • liquid_emotion On Thursday, April 24, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    interesting, interesting, interesting.... I have been under that moon. One of my favorites from you... I love it.

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    wow i like it

  • MyBrokenMynd On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, MyBrokenMynd (167)By person wrote:

    ah, what a beautiful peice on the moon.. my soul is at peace, there is forgiveness.. *Tears*

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