Strange Moon
By Stranger
Tonight, the moon seems somehow different
Pale, gray, hungry
We move as we always have:
First for the woman
and then for the man
We look to each other's eyes
for the lust, that, like the weight of the earth
has always pulled us together
But tonight,
the light of this moon
reveals in our eyes, children
lost, alone, needing approval
After we are finished
the night's cold breath punishes us
biting our flesh
as if to tell us:
Our love has become sin
But tonight,
as we lie beneath this strange moon
we feel, somehow, forgiven
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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Saturday, April 12, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Strange Moon"
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A former member wrote:
Very real. It's great .
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A former member wrote:
what makes this evencrazyer for me is the fact that my nickname is moon. and all of this is rue to me. i loves it. ^_^ great write
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On Wednesday, April 27, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Beautiful work!
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On Monday, April 4, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
very serene and beautiful
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
like the tender reminiscience of innocence as it beautifully impales a soul cold and stricken with the realities and banalities of life. beauteous. hi, there, by the way! long time no speaky! talk to you soon, i hope!
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A former member wrote:
Very nice. As JustMe said, it's calm and low. It gives me a feeling of tranquility. Very very nice.
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
BEAUTIFUL... low, calm... and very peaceful. I enjoyed this one much...thankyou for sharing it.~DW~
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On Friday, May 2, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
another piece of artwork...my applause to you.
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On Thursday, April 24, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
interesting, interesting, interesting.... I have been under that moon. One of my favorites from you... I love it.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
wow i like it
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, MyBrokenMynd
(167) wrote:
ah, what a beautiful peice on the moon.. my soul is at peace, there is forgiveness.. *Tears*