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Sadistic Statistic
By cre
a statistic
sadistic
indeed
a tear
you leer
you feed
a soul
once whole
in two
a child
beguiled
by you
a room
a tomb
a cell
imprisoned
your vision
her hell
my day
fair play
go boom
you die
goodbye
entombed
a settled score
for one in four
a sadistic
statistic
indeed
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Monday, March 31, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, The Fallen Angel
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wrote:
I like your style a lot...I wish to read more of your poetry!+Fallen One+
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
This is very cool, and what they're saying is absolutely right your ability to make words flow is awesome ~Dawn
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A former member wrote:
Your poetry is vast. even in little amounts of words you express multiple facets of meaning at once. lovely. :)
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A former member wrote:
Ehh, I am sensing a little Jane wants to send an old tormentor on their way... You are getting so damn good, I'm embarrased standing next to you...
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A former member wrote:
wonderful! it does flow together perfectly as everyone said...
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On Thursday, April 3, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
quick and sharp, like the bit from a knife.
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On Thursday, April 3, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
*bite
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A former member wrote:
Evil. Insane. Cool. Great work, as always.
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On Monday, March 31, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
Very nice, cre.... smooth...
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A former member wrote:
wow, i love it, i really like how it flows its a great piece, i love your work, keep it up , im sure you will, - dave
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