Glass Doll

By veingo

I wish I could find someone


who hates the written word


and introduce them to you


so that I could take part


in completely changing


someone.












For Bethany.

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© 2006 veingo
Published on Thursday, March 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Tribute" and
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  • sIo On Friday, December 9, 2016, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    Holy crap that was a wrecking ball. Amazing work!

  • veingo On Wednesday, February 8, 2017, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: I find it pointless, for explaining every single word is so tiring, that I might as well just rape them with ignorance. Still I love the meaning behind this, and endorse it if it can be done. Much love ~Rich

  • A former member wrote: What we all want to do as writers very well put succinct and to the point.

  • A former member wrote: It's sweet. :D

  • carlosjackal On Monday, January 28, 2013, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Fuck..This is even better than I first remember. Well deserved POTD.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful

  • metaphormachine On Monday, January 28, 2013, metaphormachine (133)By person wrote:

    Nice written ... great modern poem, tribute & vision ... Maybe true floating visions ... pervading wishes ... of an adoring poet ... or for an enchanting essence ... for literal & sensual in- & outputs ... love-filled!? Surely worthy as poem of the day. The best one since I'm here ...

  • PoetessDarkly On Monday, January 28, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    wow so much depth in such a short work of art. love the imagery and the flow is spot on.

  • A former member wrote: Succinct and beautiful- I can totally relate to those words. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: Simply written though beautiful

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Wednesday, February 8, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    How pretty.

  • A former member wrote: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. bethany.... where has she gone............... *is sad* such a fitting tribute

  • Leith Plunkett On Saturday, December 13, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    It would be a magical thing to be part of. Lovely tribute

  • carlosjackal On Monday, September 22, 2008, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Still a great tribute :)

  • A former member wrote: i adore this.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, March 30, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    :) Perfect....what a tribute, Ron.

  • A former member wrote: sigh. i love you ron.

  • A former member wrote: This was a very intersting short piece .... Scarlet

  • kiss of the dark On Friday, June 16, 2006, kiss of the dark (32)By person wrote:

    wow...enough said.

  • A former member wrote: this actually makes me teary eyed..

  • A former member wrote: awww. *smiles* i luff you ron!

  • A former member wrote: wonderfully expressed and very much due. Bethany, you are a howl in a whisper, with the tremendous imaginations you draw in.

  • Dei On Friday, March 24, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    i love tributes.

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, March 10, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    awww that was so sweet and beautiful Ron*hugs*

  • A former member wrote: awww, yes, Glass Doll does inspire with such a beauty and warmth in her words ... very nice of you here V...~A~

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, March 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Seconds that! What a beautiful tribute for such a beautiful girl! This is wonderful V.. *Claps* Julia~

  • Err0r On Friday, March 10, 2006, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    So true...so true.

  • A former member wrote: Here, Here!! I second that...Here, Here!!

  • NikesRain On Thursday, March 9, 2006, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    wonderful words for a lovely soul

  • A former member wrote: (!!) ron, i love you. so much. this means the world to me..you've completely stunned me. i'll be back when i can form a coherent sentence, okay? *hugs*

  • veingo On Friday, February 5, 2016, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    10 years later... this is the only thing you have bookmarked, and it's like a warm hug around my very soul....

  • A former member wrote: Awwwww. That's.. absolutely beautiful.

  • Adam On Thursday, March 9, 2006, Adam (242)By person wrote:

    I hope she loves this! Scholar


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