This Is Not America

By Six-Out

the sky ablaze with the rocket's red glare
as he set his eyes to the heavens
and held his hand to his heart
and felt pride, as he'd never felt before

his eyes watered as he saw his friends- his brothers
heads bowed, with the fireworks in the sky
behind them bringing the night to life

this was not America- this was not a theatre
but this was his life, or something resembling it


on this field, he saw his childhood- in a flash
he saw age 12 and playing baseball with his friends
he saw age 15 and his first date
he saw age 18 and his enlistment
he saw age 21, only it was now a glimmer
of what never will be

he saw his family, for this was the last time
and he prayed that he'd see them again
one day


and with the bombs bursting in air
a young boy became a man became a soldier
became a historical statistic

this is not America- this is not a theatre
but this was his life



and now it's gone

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Copyright 2005 Jon Rodgers
Published on Sunday, May 15, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "This Is Not America"

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  • A former member wrote: This really touches the bottom of my heart. Thank you!

  • A former member wrote: Very sad... Meaningful

  • insideout On Saturday, June 12, 2010, insideout (47)By person wrote:

    This is sadly beautiful. Great write!

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully written. Reminds me of Andrea Gibson's "For Eli"

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, May 24, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This deserves more comments. So much conveyed in the beautiful simplicity of these words. -Carl

  • DarkDruidess On Thursday, May 19, 2005, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    beautiful piece... one that all should read and take notice of...

  • A former member wrote: Yay, it's back.

  • A former member wrote: ..only humanity.

  • sIo On Sunday, May 15, 2005, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    sad...

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Great write, as always. ~*~tart~*~

  • Northstar On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    nicely captured vignette piece---highly visual creating powerful images and stirring emotions

  • A former member wrote: honour dies for dead causes. Not America, no. But a land in which the rich soil anticipates the bloody thrust as we plant flags. Sons and daughters sacrificed on the altar of empirialism.

  • Six-Out On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Repost from the La Pistola account.


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