This Is Not America
By Six-Out
the sky ablaze with the rocket's red glare
as he set his eyes to the heavens
and held his hand to his heart
and felt pride, as he'd never felt before
his eyes watered as he saw his friends- his brothers
heads bowed, with the fireworks in the sky
behind them bringing the night to life
this was not America- this was not a theatre
but this was his life, or something resembling it
on this field, he saw his childhood- in a flash
he saw age 12 and playing baseball with his friends
he saw age 15 and his first date
he saw age 18 and his enlistment
he saw age 21, only it was now a glimmer
of what never will be
he saw his family, for this was the last time
and he prayed that he'd see them again
one day
and with the bombs bursting in air
a young boy became a man became a soldier
became a historical statistic
this is not America- this is not a theatre
but this was his life
and now it's gone
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Comments on "This Is Not America"
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A former member wrote:
This really touches the bottom of my heart. Thank you!
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A former member wrote:
Very sad... Meaningful
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On Saturday, June 12, 2010, insideout
(47) wrote:
This is sadly beautiful. Great write!
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully written. Reminds me of Andrea Gibson's "For Eli"
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On Thursday, May 24, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
This deserves more comments. So much conveyed in the beautiful simplicity of these words. -Carl
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On Thursday, May 19, 2005, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
beautiful piece... one that all should read and take notice of...
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A former member wrote:
Yay, it's back.
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A former member wrote:
..only humanity.
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
sad...
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Great write, as always. ~*~tart~*~
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Northstar
(374) wrote:
nicely captured vignette piece---highly visual creating powerful images and stirring emotions
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A former member wrote:
honour dies for dead causes. Not America, no. But a land in which the rich soil anticipates the bloody thrust as we plant flags. Sons and daughters sacrificed on the altar of empirialism.
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Repost from the La Pistola account.