Sequel to The Minds Silent voice

By Daughter_Of_The_Moon

I'm breaking down inside
I'm so lost and confused
I don't know who I am anymore
I'm living day by day
And I can't think of one thing
That means much right now
Nothing seems important enough
For me to look forward to
For me to live for and to
Bring myself out of this hole
Yes the darkness has taken me again
Just as i feared, and yet knew it would
I wanted so bad for you to keep it away
To make life shine again.
But the light is gone once again
It never really stays
They say every9one has a reason to live
Where is mine?
Has the darkness hid it from me?
No, no, it's gone, been taken away
Maybe I never had one
Maybe it's to stay here
Alone, locked away for eternity
to forever search but never find
the one thing ot break the despair
until the moment when all hope fades
And whoever I was to become
And what I was meant to be
Is lost for foreve, never to return.

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Copyright 2004 Daughter_Of_The_Moon
Published on Wednesday, December 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I know what this feels like. It took me back. Truly amazing.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, August 13, 2010, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Brilliant, brilliant...You nailed this one so well and never let the piece slide into pure self-pitying sludge. Truthful, honest and a place we've all been before. Very well done, indeed.

  • thecitymorgue On Saturday, February 14, 2009, thecitymorgue (37)By person wrote:

    i know this feeling...good writing

  • Winter Born On Sunday, March 25, 2007, Winter Born (169)By person wrote:

    the darkness held my heart in it's sway for so long, I believed I was happier feeling nothing but rage. I hope you have managed to break this admantine grip...

  • A former member wrote: hmm...yes, sometimes it's easier to let the darkness consume us..and i once heard it say that if u don't have anything to die for then u have nothing to live for...also

  • A former member wrote: in some way, we can't expect for someone to show us the "light"..we may want them to cuz we love them, but if they aren't willing, it sucks and that brings us even more darkness =[. i hope u feel better/ have gotten out of it =]

  • Aunty Depressant On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Aunty Depressant (423)By person wrote:

    That place is icky to be at...not really sure how I escape it...I guess crisis happens to wake me up...or something will just strike me as funny...hmmm..hope things have changed.

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, April 17, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    amazing write... something that kept me interested... is something i havent read in a few days. ~*~Tart~*~


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