nicotine stains and lipstick.d linguistics
By Six-Out
you.re [n/o/t/h/i/n/g] but a fading 'something'
on the face of a
for:gotten tomorrow
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she sits [so beautiful] in all of her seemingly nonchalant-ity
.hours can pass into minutes as :eyes water
-with lipid tears and broken butterfly wings
maybe in time life can seem [less] mean-ing/less
with the- lies she tells herself.._it.s all- alright
she hopes she can ne.gle[ct] logic long enough
bruised egos and candy-coated redemption
with fractions of psuedo-life pasted to a ring of recollection
watching line
upon line of jagged/ alter-perception
vindictive in its nature
her eyes tell her secrets
you.re [n/o/t/h/i/n/g] but everything
and I h.a.te.. you
for that
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her nicotine stains and lipstick.d linguistics
translate to cataclysmic simplicity
with her words. she can walk on water
as she asks/ seriously
who needs a plastic Jesus
not me ... no
not me
..-
her lies run down her arms
as she.s put on display- for the whole world to see
--_
on more cloudy day-
she says
nothing like the rest of your life
to put a damper on today
may.be she can ne.gle[ct] logic long enough
to ease her world of pain
may.be she can finally be-lie/ve her l.ie.s
//you.re [n/o/t/h/i/n/g] to any-one
except me
Comments on "nicotine stains and lipstick.d linguistics"
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On Tuesday, July 18, 2017, worm
(1149) wrote:
just found this perusing random poems... this is like finding money in the pocket of a jacket you haven't worn for a few years... unexpected and gratifying! ~worm~
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On Sunday, July 24, 2005, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
i remember this well , perfect like automation ... programmed , not practiced ... truth , not just holding believability ... xray eyes always have a coldest stare ... only because they see truth
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On Sunday, July 24, 2005, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
whether programmed to break her down , or inform her fully .. the truth here is unquestionable ... this ends with the grandest of understatements ... exceptional work ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
"you.re [n/o/t/h/i/n/g] but a fading 'something'
on the face of a
for:gotten tomorrow" Great intro... "cataclysmic simplicity" [super.b]. Bloody fantas.tic. Beautifully structured adding depth of extreme visual l
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A former member wrote:
... like a photographed painting of pain & beauty "with lipid tears and broken butterfly wings" Bravo!
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
A very compelling write. ~Whisper~
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Rachel
(210) wrote:
I only have three words for this: You were right.
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2004, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
Wow...::bows::this was outstanding, so powerful, and I don't even think nonchalant-ity is a real word....but so well incorporated, I loved the line "nothing like the rest of your life to put a damper on today"...>Raven
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On Tuesday, September 28, 2004, Armand
(54) wrote:
jon, you have raised your own bar with this one. pure poetry, with best of CD-like quotables. dont let the muse on this one get away. BRAVO!
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A former member wrote:
meh..it's like the guy's response to Tori Amos's "Spark"...that is a compliment, by the way..listen to that song, you'll see the connection and why I like this...
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
jumping into the darkside of elemental prose...........you continue to impress me......................urban
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A former member wrote:
"bruised egos and candy-coated redemption" - first off, id like to let you know how much i LOVE that line. second off, i'd like to worship the ground you walk on for writing such magnificant poetry for the masses. and we love you for it. thankees. *huggle
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A former member wrote:
s*
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
crushing closing to a imploding building of emotions....everything in this superbly displayed by a rectal rainbow such as yourself...keep shining gaytard...****chris
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A former member wrote:
Holy Moses...to think it came alive before me! What a somber masterpiece...to be treated delicately, but taken deeply to heart.
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was amazing! the pain, the melancholia! brilliant!
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
"You are nothing but everything and i hate you for that" Those lines are soul shattering..in fact the whole piece is a masterpiece of soul shatteringness...