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Cotton
By Six-Out
ebony wings of a broken dream
drifting into the abysmal something
as your words carry on
in breaths of shrunken air
feed me your truths
because in your world
this is perfection
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thank you
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Copyright 2004 Six-Out
Published on Friday, September 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, January 18, 2010, Riven Waker
(323)
wrote:
a quick read - nonetheless of limitless beauty - a great work
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A former member wrote:
elegance indeed. and youre welcome, m'love
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Bared boned elegance.
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
dry in the mouth, but it feels so nice against the skin. ^_^ why do you no longer love me, sixie?
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
damn man...this is very good...very ethereal...you're talent really has no limits...-l-
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
stunning in its beauty and simple eloquence
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, Whisper
(112) wrote:
I enjoyed this write, it's shorter than most your other write, but it is still great. ~Whisper~
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Short, but dripping with emotion. I like this six.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
*chooking on cotton truths* urgh ... "Harvest the truth"
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Well yea, trying to get back on track here. Yes, this made me think of how I despise "pocket wisdom" and "poetic justice" and want to kill it, to chooke on new things that are just as gross.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Ask not why; "why's" will not explain why.... So there ... done. I enjoyed chooking on this. Tiger
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Want to point out that it freaked me out to have writen my new short poem maybe at the same time you wrote this. Explanation is in the title. Maybe it does, explain I mean. Maybe it dosnt say shit of what I meant it to.... Okey now I am realy done.
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