A SONG!, A Song?

By Mute Serenade

TIM-
you're much cooler than the BRIM
of your HAT.
No one wants to hit you with a BASEballBAT.
A thug cheerleader would CALL you "PHAT"
I can't think of anything that's good to RHYME with THAT
When you're down I'll buy you A fruitBASK...AT.
The rhyme scheme falls under poetic license so DEAL with THAT.
SUICIDESEASON-
you are one of the REASONS I post my THOUGHTS
I must admit it's kinda fun to BEEEE your BOSS.
I'm up on hygeine but you don't even NEED to FLOSS
One of my favorite words is AL-ba-TROSS
You never ever seem to MAKE me CROSS
If you were ever to leave it'd BEEE our LOSS
If you had hope in a good ending that HOPE is LOST.

(If you're ever down check it out Tim...! I woke up after not sleeping for FOREVER and this is the first thing that popped in my head, i was kinda hopping from one leg to another while singing it under my breathe. I keep thinking of three's company when i read it over though... weird....)

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Copyright 2004 Mute Serenade
Published on Wednesday, April 28, 2004.     Filed under:
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, September 17, 2017, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Take it to the bridge! This was cray cray fun to read and I'm sure Tim loved it.

  • Jerry stiles On Sunday, September 17, 2017, Jerry stiles (251)By person wrote:

    Like an albatross climbing a hickory tree,,sorry,,that word brought a country song too mind,,""creepin""...great word play here,,

  • Arwen On Tuesday, August 15, 2017, Arwen (187)By person wrote:

    I like how you play with words!

  • blue On Monday, August 29, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    lmao!! wow.. Rev, you get all the hot chicks don't you.. my sister is gonna freak when she hears about this! And you! Little Susie.. hoppin' around with the Rev in mind, tsk tsk :) You both get a cookie. ~b

  • Delphoid-Q On Monday, November 29, 2004, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    The ending is brilliant!

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, May 6, 2004, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    I freakin' love it! lol How fun and a smile so contagious. I think this is one of the best tributes I have ever read. *giggles* YAY! :::OLd

  • sulkylime On Saturday, May 1, 2004, sulkylime (191)By person wrote:

    this is genius! what a fun wonderful tribute -

  • Daemonicus On Sunday, May 2, 2004, Daemonicus (517)By person wrote:

    ha! genius exactly! this is a classic =) *manylaughs*

  • flying_fox On Thursday, April 29, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    Ahhh Sue, this kicks serious butt. you should try sleep deprivation more often!!! Love your work as always.

  • WinterGrave On Thursday, April 29, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    a vary interesting piece, enjoyed it alot though.~~~Grave

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