Sunshine on Blackwater
By happilydepressed
Listening to and following the spirits we all crave
Boiling in a black cauldron in a dark cave
Did your demon host show you the path
And beneath the blackwater did you embrace the reaper's wrath
Did your candle burn out in a whimper?
Are your words silent or are they a low whisper?
Meant to reassure yourself and feel safe
"This is not my love it is my faith"
Were you meant to be here is not for me to say
But a little bit of sunshine would make for a beautiful day
Its the spirits we crave but the sunshine is all we need
Forlorn to be reborn and rise above the waves so the creatures will feed
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Author's Note:
Timber Timbre - Blackwater https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsuQUP1lfDAComments on "Sunshine on Blackwater"
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On Saturday, October 31, 2020, Shaded_Iris
(82) wrote:
I must say Congratulations, on the contest win. This is a kickass write. Having never entered a contest before, I must say this hits like heavyweight. Much Respect.
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On Saturday, October 31, 2020, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
thank you Shaded_Iris, i had no expectation of winning but very grateful and honored i did, thank you for reading : ) : (
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On Friday, October 30, 2020, Lux
(280) wrote:
I am 100% creeped and terrified today thanks to that video... I never knew this existed and while I was confused for a moment, the video show-cased what I'm sure will haunt me in my dreams tonight. The piece itself speaks light to that. The part about the candle...that's going to stick with me for quite some time. Thank you!
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On Friday, October 30, 2020, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
Your welcome, i wanted to showcase something obscure and relatively unknown and most of all creepy and spooky, thank you for the feedback : ) : (
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On Monday, October 26, 2020, Poetic-Realm
(253) wrote:
That last line was my favorite bit of this one. Thanks for sharing.
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On Monday, October 26, 2020, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
thank you for reading
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On Saturday, October 24, 2020, I IS ME
(380) wrote:
We like this it is drawing us back, we can smell things. Thanks
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On Saturday, October 24, 2020, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
thank you guys for reading : ) : (