Unlove ft. happilydepressed, bornfrompain

By themasterhunter

Spinning out of control,
coughing up my soul, 
Time really does take a toll
Where is my heart you stole,
Are the mind police still on patrol

   Running in the cold
   remembering the toll,
   screaming for your soul,
   Your heart taken but unsold,
   worth more than its weight in gold-


It took me my whole life to find you

even less than a jaded word to loose you

this doesnt make any fucking sense to me

all the reasons as to why;

why you’re all of a sudden giving me

the cold shoulder


Maybe that’s why I fell in love with you

in the first place?

Skin this cold shouldn’t be able to

ignite a spark

but yet you have been my light in the

darkness all this time

Dancing, drowning in a red sea of flames and sulfur,
Reaching for the hand that’s extended once more,
Searching in vain trying to forget but I remember,
My burnt corpse washes ashore,
And like a phoenix I rise like i have always before

   But I keep falling,
   the cold is appalling
   I have no heartbeat but I stand,
   My soul is the feeble warmth from my core,
  And bleeding I break ashore,
  My dead-eyed corpse shambling




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Copyright 2020 themasterhunter
Published on Saturday, October 3, 2020.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

1,4 hd / 2,5 tmh / 3 bfp if you wanna know
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  • sIo On Sunday, October 4, 2020, sIo (940)By person wrote:

    Dripping with agony and a perfect mesh of imagination. Well done.

  • Bornfrompain On Saturday, October 3, 2020, Bornfrompain (944)By person wrote:

    Man this was great writing with you two. Thanks for letting me collaborate this with you two!! - BFP

  • happilydepressed On Saturday, October 3, 2020, happilydepressed (423)By person wrote:

    Many thanks to you both, this was an awesome experience

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