The Worst Way to Miss Someone (And I see you everyday)
By Mademoiselle_Minx
I watch you
From the corners of the classrooms
And I see you everyday
I see you
Flirting with others, like I'm invisible
And I see you everyday
I hear you
Talking about ''her'' like you used to about me
And I see you everyday
I know you
Call her when you say you will, you didn't for me
And I see you everyday
I think you
Think I look upon you as only a friend to me now
And I see you everyday
I sit next to you
Knowing I can never have you
And I see you everyday
I feel you
As you brush past me in a crowded canteen
And I see you everyday
I thought you
Said you loved me?
And I see you everyday
I understand you
Only come back to me through habit
And I see you everyday
I envy you
Because you can wash your hands of me
And I see you everyday
The worst way
To miss someone is
When you see them everyday…
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Comments on "The Worst Way to Miss Someone (And I see you everyday)"
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A former member wrote:
You got it. Bam.
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A former member wrote:
I love the way you put words to such a terrible, undescribable feeling that I know well. One thing to be glad for-he actually washed his hands of you. The one I miss acts like WE had never happened, and he flirts and sticks up for me every day. I have to admit, it would almost be better if he stopped being nice. Maybe then I could stop loving him and this pain would go away.
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A former member wrote:
This poem reminds me of a friend of mine who couldn't have me because i'm in love with someone else. It is a very good poem. I liked the style of it. A for the day!
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Emotional and true. Very good write.
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On Thursday, October 21, 2004, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
sad..truth hurts..rejection the most
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On Saturday, September 27, 2003, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
Hey all thanku for all your lovely comments.This poem is xactly how I feel at the moment so Im glad u liked it. Mucho appreciated! ~Katie~
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A former member wrote:
O yes - i love this work. I've felt kinda like this before but could never describe it as well as you have - Beautiful work.
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, Forever Cold
(33) wrote:
oh yes, i do know this killing feeling all to well, you discribed it all to accuratly..very well done...
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A former member wrote:
I think its great and for someone who writes mostly about satan i think you can immagine that is a pretty good compliment. have a great... life
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A former member wrote:
srry instead of for substitute from
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, IceDragoness
(193) wrote:
i haven't experienced this personally but i imagine i'd have to agree, the repition you use works well for this ~Dawn