One of Us...
By Stranger
She begins to undress, as if it is a greeting
"Stop," I tell her, “you are already naked to me”
But her clothes fall like petals
She steps closer
“Stop,” I tell her, “you have nothing left to give”
But skin touches skin
I wrap her hair around my hands as she kneels
“Do not stop,” she tells me
But I do
“Confess, confess,” I whisper, “I will not punish you for free”
"Stop," I tell her, “you are already naked to me”
But her clothes fall like petals
She steps closer
“Stop,” I tell her, “you have nothing left to give”
But skin touches skin
I wrap her hair around my hands as she kneels
“Do not stop,” she tells me
But I do
“Confess, confess,” I whisper, “I will not punish you for free”
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Copyright 2014 Stranger
Published on Thursday, April 24, 2014.
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On Wednesday, July 16, 2014, Star
(879) wrote:
goddammit... that last line. definitely a ten.
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On Saturday, April 26, 2014, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...intriguing. the price of ecstasy...
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On Friday, April 25, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Nice write. 10
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On Friday, April 25, 2014, Dark Unicorn
(49) wrote:
I will confess I had to read it twice to understand but now that I do I have to agree with White City Willows that the last part really ties it together in an unexpected way.Brilliant poem.
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A former member wrote:
I'll admit, the final lines were a surprise, but pulled it all together