9MM

By FearlessDragon

9

Is for the number of times I cried for you


M

Is for the Madness you've put me through


M

Is for the Man i've become

Staring down the barrel of this gun


I blame you...



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Copyright 2012 FearlessDragon
Published on Saturday, December 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: marvelously brilliant write.. short but you definately get your point across.. so glad you wrote it down instead of actually doing it because now i get to read you wonderful art! Thanks for sharing hun!

  • midnights voice On Friday, December 28, 2012, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    I enjoy this very unique poem. Bravo !

  • deathndismay On Sunday, December 23, 2012, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    Like a masterpiece note, written in the haste of adrenaline induced fury... Very nice

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, December 23, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...like your name, this piece rushes to its indictment w/o fear. when we decide to pull the trigger, it's that quick...

  • Malcholm Dark On Saturday, December 22, 2012, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    a different look into suicide... well done

  • A former member wrote: WOw, for real...I like this.

  • A former member wrote: Wow! Okay...this was GREAT! Like, seriously. I can't get over it. The title and the poem fit so wonderfully together...This was amazing. The few words you used struck me harder than most really long poems. AMAZING. 10/10

  • FearlessDragon On Saturday, December 22, 2012, FearlessDragon (137)By person wrote:

    :) that means a lot, thank you.

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