Mass Unproduction

By FearlessDragon

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The theme of our days
The moans of a whore

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Copyright 2012 FearlessDragon
Published on Saturday, December 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • midnights voice On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, midnights voice (957)By person wrote:

    As close to a haiku as you can get. But says so much more.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Friday, December 28, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    Ampant comercialism becomming a bit .. flacid? Very well done Scholar

  • A former member wrote: ... and here lies truth... much loved read! ty for posting!!! Scholar

  • dwells On Saturday, December 22, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Welcome to DP and this minimalist piece was brilliant, give it to me baby!

  • A former member wrote: It's really awesome how three lines can be very somber but very humorous at the same time. This poem, for some reason, seems to speak to me, and I like the comparision of the theme of our days to the moans of a whore. I never really thought about it like that. Well done.

  • FearlessDragon On Saturday, December 22, 2012, FearlessDragon (137)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much. I wrote this when i was in a very weird mood lol.

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