Mass Unproduction
By FearlessDragon
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The theme of our days
The moans of
a whore
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Copyright 2012 FearlessDragon
Published on Saturday, December 22, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
As close to a haiku as you can get. But says so much more.
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On Friday, December 28, 2012, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
Ampant comercialism becomming a bit .. flacid? Very well done
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A former member wrote:
... and here lies truth... much loved read! ty for posting!!!
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On Saturday, December 22, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Welcome to DP and this minimalist piece was brilliant, give it to me baby!
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A former member wrote:
It's really awesome how three lines can be very somber but very humorous at the same time. This poem, for some reason, seems to speak to me, and I like the comparision of the theme of our days to the moans of a whore. I never really thought about it like that. Well done.
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On Saturday, December 22, 2012, FearlessDragon
(137) wrote:
Thank you very much. I wrote this when i was in a very weird mood lol.