Requiem (Act I - Prelude)

By FearlessDragon

My bow a razor's edge
Upon a violin of flesh

Streaks of rain descend
Each drop a fragile note

Conductor's staff of scarlet twirls
Keep structured the ensemble

Frantic muffled hums
My quartet of weeping cellos

Exasperated huffs
Creep in the weary woodwinds

These eyes of blackened clefs
Guide all the scales between

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Copyright 2012 FearlessDragon
Published on Friday, December 21, 2012.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson (1012)By person wrote:

    Clever word choice. I indeed think you are a genius. :)

  • darkheartmagic On Tuesday, July 30, 2013, darkheartmagic (93)By person wrote:

    Wow in such few words this poem really says alot to me great read my friend.

  • Stephanie Sideways On Monday, December 31, 2012, Stephanie Sideways (302)By person wrote:

    I actually read it as self harming. And the ref to music as the relief that the person would feel but it could also be the joy of inflicting pain on others also. Which ever, it was very cleverly done! (Like your picture ;-) )

  • FearlessDragon On Monday, December 31, 2012, FearlessDragon (204)By person wrote:

    I like how you open my eyes to different interpretations. ( and thank you ;) )

  • dwells On Sunday, December 23, 2012, dwells (5702)By person wrote:

    Very musical and reminds me of when I played the clarinet and piano, never mastered either one I'm afraid, cheers! Recommend something Wagnerian for your next gore fest.

  • Meggerz On Sunday, December 23, 2012, Meggerz (88)By person wrote:

    Very beautifully composed... Very visually satisfying. ^^ welcome to dp!!! I hope you stay a while!!!!

  • FearlessDragon On Sunday, December 23, 2012, FearlessDragon (204)By person wrote:

    Thank you, so long as there are kind people like you here I definitely plan to stay a while ;)

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, December 22, 2012, PoetessDarkly (1019)By person wrote:

    welcome to the darkside I'd offer cookies but the imps ate them all. But I am sure you will receive loads of sweet comments. :)

  • FearlessDragon On Saturday, December 22, 2012, FearlessDragon (204)By person wrote:

    Lol, thank you


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