Stone God
By violetdarkness
i picked up a stone and started mumbling
when i'm done a young man
asked "what did you do?"
his eyes focused
on the stone, staring
then i handed it over and gave him
a clue
"oh my dearest son, do you believe
in God?"
with a thunderous voice he quickly answered
"yes! a churchgoer, but why did you ask?"
"that's
good!" i said, then i left him bothered
he started
following and asked me again
"but sir what
would i do to this ugly stone?"
for a while i
thought if he'd understand
"that could be your church
when you'd feel alone"
the young man indeed was
discombobulated
his eyes again focused on the stone in
his hand
he couldn't construed what i
have just said
"but this is just a stone you picked
up from the sand"
i started to think
if i must tell him my belief
that everything
the five senses observe can be God
i know a lot of people
to me would disagree
but everyone agrees they know
good and what's bad
"young man, someday you
would see from your mind
that everything on earth is
a representation
it's either you do good or bad or wouldn't
mind
just be responsible for all of your actions."
Comments on "Stone God"
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
thanks so much all of you! ^_^ i think faith in God is very personal. it's between you and Him, whatever representation you may choose. i think god is the soul of every matter. even those that don't occupy space. just a thought. i feel honored the masters are taking time to read a newbie's piece!! ^_^ cheers!
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, Midnight Seduction
(4) wrote:
I like that you arent afraid to share your religious beliefs. I think the same way about things.
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Wise words for He does exist in all things, thanks and welcome again!
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A former member wrote:
we are always in church, to me its the only way anything makes sense... for me its just a question of whos church... you made an excellent point and put it beautifully, fine work.
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A former member wrote:
For one thing I like your user name. Also getting to the point I liked it, twas different from some of the things I click on, nice job.
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
thank you for giving a newbie's piece a read! really appreciate it ^_^
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Wow! How very ironic.. i was thinkin these things all day . hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry. make sure to roam around and read others as it will bring them to you as well .. if you eva need anyting i'm a click away.
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
i would! thanks so much really appreciate it ^_^