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hourglass
By Meshell
reflective consiousness
blood
shot eyes
painfully straining
through a lense of regret
...
keepsake memories
fading through time
soluble moments
raindrops as fast as they fall
image shifted
traveling
distances
fast lane bound
every face with a warning labled
fake
lucid dream
story ends
100 years in 2 hours
poured from an hourglass devoured by the sands of time.
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Copyright 2011 Meshell
Published on Wednesday, December 21, 2011.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
YOUR FLOW IS RIGHT ON. ENJOYED IT TO THE MAXIMUM
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On Wednesday, March 28, 2012, Meshell
(34)
wrote:
thank u so much. to leave u speechless means alot :)
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On Thursday, March 8, 2012, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
Wow, very deep. I don't really have words that would do this justice. Great job!!!!!!!
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On Sunday, March 18, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
thank u im glad my writing has moved u in such a way.
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A former member wrote:
lucid dream
story ends
100 years in 2 hours
poured from an hourglass devoured by the sands of time.
i feel like that some times,now is one of these times,welldone lady
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
it feels good to know that someone understands the feel of my words
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
thank u very much for ur appreciation.
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A former member wrote:
these were the first lines i have read from you,i will read now the rest also,you have nothing to thank,it was my pleasure to read and also feel that someone allegoricaly caught one of my feelings
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A former member wrote:
Wow an Astonishing presentation of hypodermic talent. I admire the detailed originality of your words. Well received.
Thank you
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
thank u for ur appreciation:)
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On Friday, December 30, 2011, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
This one had a fractured feel to it. Like there were cracks in the surface, barely letting us see what's hidden underneath. Write more, let us see what's there.
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On Saturday, December 24, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Lovely!! Hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry.. Roam around and read others for it will bring them to you... Nice first post.. You eva need anything i'm a click away....
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On Friday, December 23, 2011, Meshell
(34) wrote:
Thank you so much for your welcome! Reflective moments can help you appreciate the things in life that may have been taken for granted... They do for me. Anyway :)
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On Thursday, December 22, 2011, Meadowhawk
(163) wrote:
Nice imagery. Well versed.
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On Thursday, December 22, 2011, haunted
(849) wrote:
very nice meshell, time does go by fast and time is all i have! damn! welcome!!
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On Saturday, December 24, 2011, Meshell
(34) wrote:
Thank u :)
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On Thursday, December 22, 2011, Meshell
(34) wrote:
Writing has always been my passion I'm sure I will love it aswell
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On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Oh, how fast time goes by! Nice write, and welcome.
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On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, Meshell
(34) wrote:
Thank you very much. still trying to get the hang of things and understanding the site.
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On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Great, once you get the hang of it you'll never want to leave, this site brings me happiness and I'm sure it will for you too!
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