hourglass

By Meshell

reflective consiousness
blood shot eyes
painfully straining
through a lense of regret

... keepsake memories
fading through time
soluble moments
raindrops as fast as they fall

image shifted
traveling distances
fast lane bound
every face with a warning labled fake

lucid dream
story ends
100 years in 2 hours
poured from an hourglass devoured by the sands of time.

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Published on Wednesday, December 21, 2011. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Comments on "hourglass"

A former member wrote: YOUR FLOW IS RIGHT ON. ENJOYED IT TO THE MAXIMUM
On Wednesday, March 28, 2012, Meshell (34) wrote:

thank u so much. to leave u speechless means alot :)
On Thursday, March 8, 2012, ANGELSLAYER (116) wrote:

Wow, very deep. I don't really have words that would do this justice. Great job!!!!!!!
On Sunday, March 18, 2012, Meshell (34) wrote:

thank u im glad my writing has moved u in such a way.
A former member wrote: lucid dream story ends 100 years in 2 hours poured from an hourglass devoured by the sands of time. i feel like that some times,now is one of these times,welldone lady
On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Meshell (34) wrote:

it feels good to know that someone understands the feel of my words
On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Meshell (34) wrote:

thank u very much for ur appreciation.
A former member wrote: these were the first lines i have read from you,i will read now the rest also,you have nothing to thank,it was my pleasure to read and also feel that someone allegoricaly caught one of my feelings
A former member wrote: Wow an Astonishing presentation of hypodermic talent. I admire the detailed originality of your words. Well received. Thank you
On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Meshell (34) wrote:

thank u for ur appreciation:)
On Friday, December 30, 2011, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

This one had a fractured feel to it. Like there were cracks in the surface, barely letting us see what's hidden underneath. Write more, let us see what's there.
On Saturday, December 24, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Lovely!! Hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry.. Roam around and read others for it will bring them to you... Nice first post.. You eva need anything i'm a click away....
On Friday, December 23, 2011, Meshell (34) wrote:

Thank you so much for your welcome! Reflective moments can help you appreciate the things in life that may have been taken for granted... They do for me. Anyway :)
On Thursday, December 22, 2011, Meadowhawk (160) wrote:

Nice imagery. Well versed.
On Thursday, December 22, 2011, haunted (837) wrote:

very nice meshell, time does go by fast and time is all i have! damn! welcome!!
On Saturday, December 24, 2011, Meshell (34) wrote:

Thank u :)
On Thursday, December 22, 2011, Meshell (34) wrote:

Writing has always been my passion I'm sure I will love it aswell
On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, Phantasmagoria (121) wrote:

Oh, how fast time goes by! Nice write, and welcome.
On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, Meshell (34) wrote:

Thank you very much. still trying to get the hang of things and understanding the site.
On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, Phantasmagoria (121) wrote:

Great, once you get the hang of it you'll never want to leave, this site brings me happiness and I'm sure it will for you too!