The knife in the dark
By violetdarkness
secluded
here in the dark
for tonight i'm waiting
waiting
to come out
from the muderer's pocket
your sands of time
run out.
your death comes near
your blood i starve
soon when freed i'd go outside
to stab you countless times
for he would use me
and soon you'd hear music
your death's
chime.
tonight i'm waiting
in the dark to go
out
from the muderer's pocket
i'm wanting to come out
for
he would take your life
upon his will
and i would taste
it
your sweet flesh
your luscious meat.
but
stranger blame me not
why i hunger this
from my master's
control
in his old practice
i've hungered your death
your innocense
your peace.
once in the kitchen
now this is my home
in the muderer's pocket
waiting for
him
to kill.
Comments on "The knife in the dark"
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A former member wrote:
I love za thrill and darkness in this work. well done!
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On Friday, May 18, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
this is so horrificlly amazing! i loved it. you have quite the imagination here. wow is all i can say.
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On Saturday, May 19, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
thanks again haunted! let's just wish the murderer doesn't have a gun like what dwells said! haha! i'm honoredl. thanks for dropping by to my crafts.
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, Undertaker
(32) wrote:
Oh how i like murders pocket! so deep, so dark haha great poem.
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On Saturday, May 19, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
thanks undertaker! :)
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A former member wrote:
excellent rhyme here, wonderfully dark and such an odd point of view
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
thanks redbust! ^_^ really appreciate your comment :)
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On Friday, April 6, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Nasty knife there, and better hope the victim doesn't have a gun (HA)! Welcome to DP and thanks for this unusual perspective, cheers.
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, violetdarkness
(50) wrote:
thanks so much! :)