A Wicked Dream...
By A Velvet Tongue
Long legs slid from under satin sheets
bare feet slipping onto familiar plush carpet
I wandered into the bathroom
leaning into the garden tub, my fingers found
the hot water faucet, and slid it on..
-STOP-
-Rewind-
Lets go back, before I fully awoke.
Shall we?
Are you certain
you want to hear this?
If easily offended,...read no more...
I was dreaming..
of a dozen bodies entwined
Limbs coiling limbs
Sweat dripping from the forms
onto my proud, naked breasts.
I couldn't see gender, or color
I could only feel...
warm wet tongues lapping my tiny nipples
bringing them to erectness, painfully so..
fingertips running softly up my slit
pausing to slip the hood of my clit back
before pinching it....
My spine arched full and deep
lips suckling the tip of my chiseled chin
teeth grazing the flesh of my throat
I could hear my own soft growls of lust
desire,greed and passion welling deeper
feral..
Then as if the grecian orgy was spent
A soddering rod of pleasure
plunged into me...it was sinfully slow
at first..
I could feel my tight honied walls
grip it, slick and possesive
a hand to the perfectly thick glove
my kegal muscles expanding and relaxing
with each slow, deep, grinding
-~-THRUST-~`
My eyelids seemed like they had been sewn shut
before I felt them flutter
taking in my surroundings once again
As the haze of early morning cleared..
I was looking upon your strong calves
nipples brushing along the tops of your thighs
I simply leaned down, it was but an inch away..
my tongue slithered out to snake and lap at
that sexy bone that protruded from your ankle.
silken lips placed a kiss upon it
Suddenly, I knew
I was riding you...backwards
The curvature of my spine, facing you..
glistening with sweat..
Long nailtips traveled the arch of your feet
As my body rose and fell, in an erotic dance.
I could feel the heat, of your proud arms as
nailtips raked my tender flesh...your pleasure
ignited me...as the pain laced a deeper need..
I smiled to myself as my head caught up
with my form..
Feeling you buck and grind under me
as I kept the pace slow and taunting
Hips arose and circled you
ravaging you in unbridled patterns
before pounding down and gripping tight once again..
until I felt the heat of your release
coat my cave like a curtain of flames...
consuming me...
My own honied waves crescendoed
then crashed..
onto you..
we joined once again
as we have thousands of times before..
I layed there
Just as you did last eve
when you fell asleep inside me
what did you expect me to do
feeling your body awaken as you
stretched in my sweet cave?
It was an animal instinct
and I slid to sit upright
Fully, now
Long arms lifting high above my head
fingers enterlacing..
feeling your fingertips dance softly
down the center of my slick, silken spine
my hips lifted in the stretch
forcing you to withdraw from within me
the cold air reminding you,
of the emptiness
outside my heated depths.
The alarm rang just then
and I looked back over my shoulder
and simply smiled to you..
Ready... to start my day
Comments on "A Wicked Dream..."
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A former member wrote:
Very good poem the imagery is great. I feel as if it was broken up wrong. I loved it though do not get me wrong I just felt a weird breaking of the stanzas. Great poem though
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On Sunday, June 26, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
enchanting and haunting. amazing work. -kitty
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On Tuesday, June 14, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wow this is absolutely amazing. Very sexy. ~Unlucky
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On Tuesday, June 14, 2005, etarnally damnd
(61) wrote:
damn that was descriptive. damn i need a freakn ice shower so bad. or a well i can think of something better but damn no one here. cold shower it is. damn good write.-michael
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On Monday, May 23, 2005, Labitina
(37) wrote:
This was fuckin awesome, my mind searches for words but I'm at a loss... ~ Tina
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On Sunday, May 1, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Holy shit... *wetter than ever* The wetter the better i like to say. haha. Great write. Felt like I was right there. Captivating words. ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
oh damn! I'm tingling.....and wet!
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A former member wrote:
very sexy, very good. great write
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
ooooohhhhh myyyyy effffinnnngg god. seriously wowow~ss
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A former member wrote:
Oh man! This was very hot, steamy, and sexy. *gives Randy a come hither look* Damn, great write hun! * runs with Randy to the bed* ~Cal~
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I can't breath. Also its kinda hard to type with one hand. (heh heh...no seriously) Vel, This was one of the most visually amazing peices I've ever read. Thanks for pointing it out to me babe.
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, SluG
(35) wrote:
uhhh, well, uhhh, fucking sweet. Uhhh, I, uhhh, at a loss for words, hot damn, gotta go jump in a lake somewhere now.
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A former member wrote:
Better than the morning cup of coffee, huh? Well, maybe not... damn I can't decide. Hot... very... VERY hot... damn.
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On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Silver Spectre
(95) wrote:
Healthy I believe it is called... A Healthy sex drive,,My kind of woman~Silver~
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
healthy indeed...silver dear...healthy and creative...*winx*
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A former member wrote:
As I have said before... you are my Goddess! I wish I could write stuff like that! Where does a girl like me get inspiration!?! ARGH!
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On Sunday, November 23, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
heh , well I can dp mail you some suggestions if you like?..*evil grin*
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On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Silver Spectre
(95) wrote:
Practice practice practice........he he he he~Silver~
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
errr... uhh... phfftt... ahhh... whew.
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
.....*picks mouth up*....amazing vel.. where do i sign up...hehehe ~Drea~
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On Monday, September 22, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
holy shit..............bring on the hormones
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A former member wrote:
Not only are your poems sexy as hell, so are you! I need a very cold shower. Fuck that, I need an ice bath!
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
Sexy as hell eh?...You aren't so bad yourself dear!
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
If only... I hate it when I get all horny and there is no one around to do anything about it. Damn you.
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On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
mm...I love this...you are goood. you make me feel soo...heh...mm...off to find a playtoy ^_^...amazing...
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On Monday, July 21, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
I am gealous of the lucky man that wakes next to you and inspire such erotic thoughts. I would never imagine something so, so absolutley sexual in my entire life. You say you tarry in my mind I would love to live in yours.
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
oh come now...surely this isn't the MOST sexual thing you've read...I can do better...:)...*winx*
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On Friday, July 18, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
i can say i am still trying to breath!...an amazing job..arousing and alive...loved it all way through..
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On Friday, July 18, 2003, SeekingNirvana
(27) wrote:
whoa. you never cease to amaze me. all i got to say :)
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On Friday, July 18, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
Very good is all I can say..............O.
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A former member wrote:
damn... awesome... just awesome, I'm running out of things to say to poetry such as this so awesome it is
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On Friday, July 18, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
Well, thanks, I seem to capture the erotic writes as of lately..Must be something Im sifting through...???
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A former member wrote:
no. your right. its hot in here. excuse me i must go and find my boyfriend *quests*
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
*grabs an ice cube*...do you have a need to be cooled, darkling?..*grins*
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A former member wrote:
holy damn. thats all.. just...*changes pants*