Slepnir, the Immortal War Horse

By HeadpatSlut

His blood of giants, Gods, and steeds-

Alfadir is his master-

Victorious war is all he needs-

An Omen of Disaster.

 

A massive horse, at sixteen hands-

                                                 When measured from the ground-         

He gallops mythic, wondrous lands-

With thunderous hooves that pound.

 

With speed and power like no other-

With not one beast to near him-

Bloodthirsty Fenris, his half-blood brother-

So even dragons fear him.

 

This mighty steed, with steel hooves-

Not four, but numbered eight-

Through eight dimensions that he moves-

All nine worlds await.







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Copyright 2011 DK6_Marius
Published on Thursday, December 8, 2011.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Wierdest thing, could have sword I posted this ages ago, but I couldn't find it on my page. . . . . .
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  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, December 29, 2012, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    war is never far from mortal hearts. awesome pen

  • dwells On Tuesday, September 4, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Almost seems like an Apocalyptic horse to be mentioned in later verse perhaps. Or do we get the End Times Piecemeal perhaps? - Cheers!

  • A former member wrote: Reading this makes me feel powerful...

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, January 7, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    DK6, thanks for your comment on my rant...you're right, the world won't change,,,glad I got it off my chest...

  • Devilish On Thursday, December 8, 2011, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Damn your good!!!! Damn!! Scholar

  • Alchemist On Thursday, December 8, 2011, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    This reminds me of the Dethklok song Thunderhorse. Bad ass write DK.

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