Bird of Metal

By rosemaiden

Flying high you try
Metal bird spread your wings across the sky
Scraping the cotton amidst the blue
Everyone watches you

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Copyright 2011 rosemaiden
Published on Thursday, November 3, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Sunday, November 27, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Excellent write rose.

  • Devilish On Thursday, November 10, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Sooo lovely... Very original... Scholar

  • veingo On Friday, November 4, 2011, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    This makes me think of sept 12th.. I had never noticed befor, that you hear planes all the time. But I sure noticed that they were gone that day. It was frightningly quiet. Quite a feeling, you brought back.. Well done. ^V^

  • dwells On Friday, November 4, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Curious piece and quite original, loved those cotton clouds, thanks.


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