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Bird of Metal
By rosemaiden
Flying high
you try
Metal bird spread your wings across the sky
Scraping
the cotton amidst the blue
Everyone watches you
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Copyright 2011 rosemaiden
Published on Thursday, November 3, 2011.
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"Poetry"
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On Sunday, November 27, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(274)
wrote:
Excellent write rose.
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On Thursday, November 10, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Sooo lovely... Very original...
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On Friday, November 4, 2011, veingo
(532) wrote:
This makes me think of sept 12th.. I had never noticed befor, that you hear planes all the time. But I sure noticed that they were gone that day. It was frightningly quiet. Quite a feeling, you brought back.. Well done. ^V^
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On Friday, November 4, 2011, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Curious piece and quite original, loved those cotton clouds, thanks.
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