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Always, To Me
By cre
For all I have hated you
In the past, and for all I may,
In future days.
I see you now
Waving gently with the passing wind
Swirling as the breeze kisses you again
A lotus
A delicately petaled beauty
Filmy veins that bore our touch
Though we barely whispered
Much.
Your skin to our gentle kiss
Was there
And paper-thin beauty
So ever fair
A remnant of our love's caress
And though through hate we did digress;
For all I have failed to love
In the day we saw and the days
Which may someday be.
I, bowing, acknowledge the Eve
The One you were . . .
Always my Mother,
Always . . . to me.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Tuesday, June 24, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, August 2, 2014, Star
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wrote:
I know this all too well. This is stunning. Thank you for writing this.
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A former member wrote:
absoultely astonishing. i did not expect the poem to end as it did. you always write beautifully, my friend. :)
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On Tuesday, July 1, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
yes... oh yes, cre.
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On Thursday, June 26, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Oh Cre....~sniffle~. You are beautiful to your soul...through every layer you are absolutely astonishingly beautiful. I feel this one deeply...and just...wow...maybe I'll comment later when not in the ~wow~ of this one.~DW~
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A former member wrote:
I like it. :)
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
I don't know what to say! I share the same feelings for my mother! This is a beautiful write! Well done Jane, well done! {Dk}
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Wow, I did not expect that ending, especially considering some of your other work. I love this jane. Again, your mastery of words has capticated me. Bravo.
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, SourInnocence
(13) wrote:
wow! i absolutely love that. you cant help but love your mother even when you hate her....great write. ~kelly
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