Free Will

By HeadpatSlut

Free Will




Live not by others words of rule-
Nor dare to be a drone-
Live how you choose, be not a fool-
In good company, or alone.

Be not decieved by friendly faces-
Who hide the true intentions-
Be not impressed by wealthy graces-
When weighed by misdirections.

Heed not the laws of social stages-
But be as one with all-
And disregard the wisest sages-
If they would make you fall.

And let not one tradition hold-
Control above your thought-
Do nothing just because you're told-
Remember why you fought.

And keep in mind the rights you own-
And freedoms that are yours-
So that this freedom may be known-
And cherished through the wars.

Look not only to the Gods for help-
For the Gods just might mislead-
And lest you be a beaten whelp-
Hold independant deed.

And listen not to what I've said
Just because I say it-
But go and think inside your head-
And never just obey it.

All in all, I say to thee-
In thought be never ill-
Nor will you be if this you see-
So use your own Free Will.

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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Published on Friday, March 12, 2010.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • Nimue44 On Thursday, March 12, 2015, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    Wish everyone did this. Can I make this the tenets of something? I imagine an army reciting this preparing for war, and then, after getting over with it, finally deciding not to go. It was a great image. Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: so wonderfully written...wish this was our planets credo....my kids love this and copied on their wall....lovepeaceharmony

  • ColourGod On Sunday, February 3, 2013, ColourGod (43)By person wrote:

    Lot's of free will here. Great write. Good inspiration to thought. 'Think for yourself question authority' - Timothy Leary

  • pureevil8 On Wednesday, June 8, 2011, pureevil8 (48)By person wrote:

    So many forget that free will is always there no matter what is taken from us. Wonderfuly put.

  • suicidalsecrecy On Monday, May 16, 2011, suicidalsecrecy (42)By person wrote:

    Simply awesome.

  • Poe Etiquette On Thursday, February 10, 2011, Poe Etiquette (124)By person wrote:

    a very intruiging concept; that of human agency and motivation. i cherished this immensely. its almost rivaling the theory of causality indirectly. purely existentialist to be sure. thank you for providing depth to the topic. write on, sir

  • HeadpatSlut On Thursday, May 26, 2011, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    What the fuck is Human Agency? Scholar

  • HeadpatSlut On Thursday, May 26, 2011, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    and what's existentialist? Scholar

  • Poe Etiquette On Monday, June 6, 2011, Poe Etiquette (124)By person wrote:

    human agency is free will. existentialism is the theory that actions have moral consequences and results

  • Poe Etiquette On Monday, June 6, 2011, Poe Etiquette (124)By person wrote:

    shall i define depth and causality also?

  • MGood On Sunday, December 12, 2010, MGood (60)By person wrote:

    :) nice message!

  • Scarrzz On Saturday, October 9, 2010, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    Well spoken, Brother. I do not love law, I love Justice. I do not love tradition, but AI love logic. I do not loveconvention, but I love a moral code, chosen from within. Well spoken indeed. Scholar

  • jonLyndon On Thursday, October 7, 2010, jonLyndon (113)By person wrote:

    Nice. "You can choose a ready guide in some celestial voice / If you choose not to decide, you still have made a choice / You can choose from phantom fears and kindness that can kill / I will choose a path that's clear. I will choose free will!" ~N. Peart. Just thought I'd toss in that lyric from a song your poem reminded me of. I really like your rhyme structure; and of course, the fight of cognitive volition. "And listen not to what I've said" ~Well done.

  • HeadpatSlut On Thursday, October 7, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    Yeah, that's actually the song that inspired the poem, and I got a chance to see Rush a few years ago, they kicked ass. \m/ Scholar

  • A former member wrote: that's what i needed! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: "Live how you choose, be not a fool" - That line says it all. yet another amazing piece. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: like it ... kinda has a back image of one who has been doin the opposite of all what's up there ... yet when he is finaly done .. lost his power and found the true meaning of everything ... tell the right pass ... yet he knows its not easy to follow cause he didn't very deep ... keep it up cheers simzzz Scholar

  • A former member wrote: its a little preachy to me,, but its good words to live by Scholar

  • T-Nothing On Friday, March 12, 2010, T-Nothing (38)By person wrote:

    a very moving write, packed full of bold and wise statements, very few people can look past their own misfortunes and what not to think this open minded, seems like ur head is on pretty straight. thanx for sharing

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