ON MY WAY

By Johny_D_Lewis

Check by check
Day by day
Lonely is the heart
Lonely as the way

Just getting by
Day by day
All alone
And on my way.


Burning out
Falling down
Scream and shout
On the ground

Ripping pain
I can't stay
Drowning rain
On my way.


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Copyright 2003 roachboyman
Published on Tuesday, May 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Bluegirl On Saturday, April 26, 2008, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    ooh, nice work here. Simply stated and well put.

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, January 8, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...short and sweet (bitter?)...hehe, but this was quite creative, kinda held a short tune...I liked this... -Darun Scholar

  • DoctorAsh On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    scortching BARNICLES!!! ;= nice little read. 'D&A'

  • CharlottesWeb On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    ooo...I like! Kinda like a low whisper as your walking away from me. Wonderful...*claps*~DW~

  • blackdarkness On Friday, October 31, 2003, blackdarkness (227)By person wrote:

    yEah I thought so to...will you wisper this to me?

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