How strong are your beliefs

By Musik2MyEyes

So many to choose from
For all walks of life
Buddist, Catholic, Taoists alike
Each so unique
Believing theirs truest

Let all have their choice
It's only what's right
There's some things that shouldn't
Cause a big fight

We each have a choice
We each have a taste
Don't push yours on me
It'd just be a waste

Hold to your convictions
Be steadfast and strong
No matter the suffering
Your choice is not wrong



I take mine black with French Vanilla please =)

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Copyright 2010 Musik2MyEyes
Published on Sunday, February 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Tonight's chat room gone wild...over coffee no doubt Don't be too critical...I typed this in like 2 minutes flat =P
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  • IAmNorge On Friday, April 2, 2010, IAmNorge (38)By person wrote:

    I liked this, I myself being a coffee lover can relate...the line "Your choice is not wrong" is still ringing in the back of my mind, good write=] ~Orion

  • A former member wrote: haha that makes me laugh bc its so true people r so ridiculous over their beliefs!!!!

  • Musik2MyEyes On Friday, April 2, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (192)By person wrote:

    This was honestly written as comic relief. It truly was just about the MANY ways people order their COFFEE. However, I was comparing it to how people are with their more serious beliefs. I'm not sure people are seeing my reference to coffee as the "punch line" to this poem. LOL But I truly enjoy everyone's comments and the willingness to be so open and let people have the right to believe whatever they want. Taking each others rights seriously IS important. And so is my coffee =P

  • lupus tenebrae On Thursday, April 1, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    I totally agree with you, why must people bicker over something so futile? I guess they never heard of freedom of religion, or they are just dogs, and all they can do is bark, because their chain is too short, very good write, especially for 2 minutes, I can't even get half of one in that length of time. Scholar

  • HeadpatSlut On Sunday, March 14, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    Yeah, all I can do here is agree with what they're all saying here, you've given us words to live by, rock on! \m/ Scholar

  • punk mc cool On Monday, March 8, 2010, punk mc cool (74)By person wrote:

    people should be more like you....your views are very open to religion and i guess this poem was the best way to show it + u typed it in 2 mins lolz that was kinda cool =P

  • Scarrzz On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    I understand the desire for peace, believe me. Unfortunately, that isn't the purpose of this world. We are here to choose, and that's why there is such a division. There is a right choice, and there is a wrong choice. The last stanza is proof enough. What if that had been written by the person who flew that jet into the twin towers? The people who lost their loved ones would tell you that a wrong choice is always wrong. * * * I understand your viewpoint, at least I believe I do, but we can't all get along if we're on different sides and we're also steadfast in our beliefs. There is good and evil, we have to choose where we stand. * * * By the way, being on the side of good does not include hating or even feeling superior to those on the other side, it mean we should DO good, and try to help them see. Out actions tell us who we are. Scholar

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Amen. A fine statement, all true. Again your poem is in perfect form. Thanks.

  • A former member wrote: THIS IS REALLY GOOD AND TRUE BECAUSE THATS WHATS MOSTLY A BIG ISSUE I NTHE WORLD, LOVE THE ENDING WITH THE COFFEE PART LOL

  • A former member wrote: haha, there's a song by M.S.I called shut me up. and theres a line that goes, " I like my coffee black just like my metal." you reminded me of that. ^^ awesome. over all I feel the same way, why people cant just the fuck along and go along i'll never understand. ~moony

  • A former member wrote: My exact view on religion.

  • Rowan On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    I liked this. It made me smile. It's true about people arguing about religions and trivial matters. We should all just let people be themselves. It shouldn't matter whether you take yours black or with cream :) Whatever floats your boat. lol

  • A former member wrote: Was there a hint of cinnamon in there somewhere? Is this taster's choice? "I measure out my life in coffee spoons"... TS Eliot, or close enough. I'd like a little more of the metaphor developed here, but there is much truth in the words. Be well Shweets!

  • Dilated View On Sunday, February 21, 2010, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Opinions opinions. Few things are more argued than religion... and apparently coffee. lol interesting read :p

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