garlic
By Jonas
i ate a piece of garlic
like it was medicine
like it was magic
hoping that the chemicals
inside the piece of produce
would course away through my veins
to burn off the mucous in my head
though i feel that i'm thinking clearly
i am distracted from
the action by the symptoms of
a lingering cold
then i wonder if the coffee i'm chasing it with
will break down the action of the garlic before it
can find my blood
but the smell on my pores reminds me that this thought
is not at all likely
but maybe instead of helping me get better
this bit of garlic just makes me stink
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© 2009 Jonas
Published on Thursday, July 2, 2009.
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On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deviated09
(90) wrote:
Mmmm... Garlic.. Nature's best food item! Screw the misconceptions and stigma of it, I still LOVE it
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On Sunday, January 13, 2013, Dei
(663) wrote:
clever. very clever the way you write superficial as if it were fathom deep. keeps ppl guessin' eh?
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On Wednesday, November 9, 2011, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
That's funny! I can relate to questioning the cure-all-crap of the day. : )
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On Wednesday, May 5, 2010, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
I love garlic. LOVE it.
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On Tuesday, September 15, 2009, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
i like it! besides garlic IS one of nature's antibiotics! ;]
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A former member wrote:
Trying to think something into something else doesn't work nearly as well as it should.
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On Thursday, November 21, 2013, Jonas
(715) wrote:
i love this comment.
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A former member wrote:
At least you won't have to worry about vampires or girl cooties.
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On Thursday, July 2, 2009, estherbell
(52) wrote:
lol.garlic rules!!