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for we
By cre
for we can barely bear to be
it's something more that I know
than you may ever see
and you will not know the breaking
or breath behind your ear
speaks of something in us waking
I sense | your | fear
and you so seldom strive to see
our screaming exhalation
undulating dreams beneath the ashen trees
path of leaves and crashing blackened skies
is it truly terror teeming
we see crawling in your eyes
where we may barely dare to dream
for senses brimming with the breathing
crackling dripping always more than you see
for we know and we touch
the core the shattering existence
in one world and insomuch
that we can barely bear to be
something more that I know
for we were always and always we will be.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Monday, May 12, 2003.
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On Monday, March 23, 2009, Shortnlethal
(65)
wrote:
i enjoyed reading this..i could feel the fellings you put into this piece..weldone ^^
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
wow....
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
I had to hunt for a word I thought might possibly convey my feelings on this one...I didn't bag much...in fact...nothing I could offer could e adquate...but I will give you what I can..."prodigious"...~DW~
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A former member wrote:
the doc puts most blatantly what I would prefer to put most eloquently, which you have, m'dear, already done...
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A former member wrote:
the form of the poem is so nice i would have to analyze it deeply to fully understand the potency it brings into this poem. :)
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On Thursday, May 15, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
brilliant, darling... you are amazing. i love you lots and lots...
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A former member wrote:
I like your work and also love your personal style. Heheh...
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On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, FallenSky
(42) wrote:
there is so much between each line it creates an almost tangible emotion... keep writing ~CFS
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Jane!!! I miss you too. Still, it seems almost impossible for you to write something I don't like. I love this one. Great job.
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
One of these days im going to fall out my chair and smack my head on the wall and die, and it will be all of your fault cre .. This time i only had to go change my pants after reading one of your works .. but next time, who knows what might happen.
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
I missed reading your work. This one is very beautiful however there is sheer terror, anger and sadness crawling from the verses! much appreciated!
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