holding on to night
By Taunting The Reaper
a thousand smiles pour out of
empty faces
and there’s this whimsical bird
that never takes flight
it flaps pointlessly
just as an avalanching destiny
blunders downwards
burying lives in its snow
the night is for watchmen
their eyes clawed open by starry sights
the day is for fools
their eyes caught squinting at burning skies
and while the cricket chirps with laughter
the sun drowns the masses
with the bustle of their mundane lives
their very own productivity
their very own personal death;
slow and deliberate
neatly wiping its feet before entering
every home
listen closely to the night
the sky is bleeding stillness
as if it were a gentle rain
feeding flowers of truth
until they blossom
bold enough
to make it through the dawn
holding on to night
Comments on "holding on to night"
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On Sunday, September 21, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
your poems always have such amazing imagery i'm taken into each one and they are lovely. i loved the whole "wiping its feet before entering each home" part.
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
a classic feel of words, vivid and yet with an unmistakable solemnity... the last section whispered beautifully without weight or shadow... outstanding
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On Monday, August 18, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Beautiful work--lovely imagery.
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On Saturday, August 9, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
"the sun drowns the masses with the bustle of their mundane lives their very own productivity their very own personal death"- You're always able to say so much in such sweet, concise stanzas. :) Lovely my friend. Reminds me of when people walk about with big dumb psuedo smiles and I wanna scream "WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM" lol
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A former member wrote:
..."the sky is bleeding stillness
as if it were a gentle rain
feeding flowers of truth
until they blossom
bold enough
to make it through the dawn
holding on to night"... omg love this... so beautifully captured
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On Monday, August 18, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
ditto!
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A former member wrote:
"neatly wiping its feet before entering every home"..love that line.