the monkey cage

By Taunting The Reaper

why don’t you leave that monkey cage?
I say, “come out and have a beer”.
you say, “not on a school night”.
to which I reply ,“school’s forever, this beer’s for tonight”

do they make soldiers in heaven?
all that armor, all those bullets, so much training
what is it that you’re ready for if not death?

why don’t you leave that monkey cage?
I say, “we’ve got all night”.
you say, “I don’t have the time”.
to which I reply, “will you have enough time
when you’re dead?”

do pretty women lie?
those long, smooth legs
such lovely hair with a silky sheen
eyes like diamonds, sparkling
lips so kissable you could taste them a mile away
what are you good for besides breaking hearts?

why don’t you get out of that monkey cage?
you say, “I’m heartbroken”.
I say, “better broken than empty”
you say ,“well, I feel empty tonight”
to which I reply, “you’re full of it!”

why don’t you get out of that monkey cage?
you say, “I’m scared”
I say, “that’s good, it means you’re alive”
you ask, “what if I fail?”
I answer, “what if you never leave that monkey cage?”

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© 2008 William Bermudez
Published on Tuesday, May 13, 2008.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • mysterylove On Sunday, June 19, 2011, mysterylove (97)By person wrote:

    i really like it.. i dont know why- i couldn't put the finger to it but i like it, a lot. i know i'll read it pretty often - till then i'll tell you why.

  • RubyXero On Sunday, May 18, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    i love the soldier reference/analogy. love it. and that last line would make her a failure...which was the point to me.

  • A former member wrote: this is good...really well written and you got your point across subtly but eloquently. good job.

  • Rebel tiGer King On Tuesday, May 13, 2008, Rebel tiGer King (239)By person wrote:

    Sir will, indeed this write made feel like a monkey in a cage, but the intensions were much deeper, excellent write -symph-

  • The Lipstick Factor On Tuesday, May 13, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (287)By person wrote:

    I had to read this twice. Not because I didn't get it, but because it's so cool. Wow..i'm not sure what to say except I really, really, really, like this. *added to faves*

  • The Lipstick Factor On Tuesday, May 13, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (287)By person wrote:

    Holy crap! *swoons*..and you're hot! I think I am getting turned on...literate, eloquent, and hot...gotta run...need batteries!


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