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Perfect Slave
By Stranger
I want to cut your perfect skin
…Bleed…
To break your perfect mold
To make you hideous
like me
I want the blood to flow
like my love
for you
…Drip…
I want to cover myself with your beauty
…Hide…
I want to feed my lust
for you
with sex and pain
and anger
I want you to serve
…Slave…
I want to bind your limbs and heart
…Freedom…
I want you plead and to scream
for my mercy, my love
To beg me to stop
To beg me to not
To give all and ask for nothing,
but for me to take it
…Possession…
I want your thoughts to be mine
…Control…
I want my commands to be your heartbeats
your pulse
You will wake and sleep
and moan and scream to them
I want, I demand, I receive
…Obedience….
I want to leave the perfect wound
…Scar…
I want the memory of our love
To stain your body for all to see
I want the sting to always burn
In the mirror
In your mind
In your skin
…Forever…
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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Tuesday, April 29, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Perfect Slave"
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A former member wrote:
this is sumptious... dark unbridled lust.. made me whimper and ache for it. i was left begging for more. deliciously decadent.
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A former member wrote:
beauty is skin deep and your words cut right to the marrow...you make me crave this role.well done ;)
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On Wednesday, September 27, 2006, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328)
wrote:
impressive.....you sent a shudder through my soul
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Sin
(1168) wrote:
I had been conquered and enraptured, destroyed and renewed, rent in fragments and made whole, freed and enslaved, broken and created..beautiful write ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
i like it. wow. -CG
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
mmmmmmmmmmmmm
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On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
ooo that gives me the shakes...I like it
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A former member wrote:
true love...emotions felt so deeply...truly sensuous.**
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On Friday, September 19, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
rereading this... and man... you know, i am aching to be that slave... not for sensuality, but emotional desire to serve... this was described perfectly from the other side. it's made me slightly wistful.
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On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Liz
(267) wrote:
I understand exactly the feelings behind this, and that scares me. Which means it's sending your message. Horribly good.
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A former member wrote:
Love it
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Wickid... gleefully wickid in fact. You stained the poem with such richness...~DW~
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On Wednesday, May 7, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
yes .. this is very good , i enjoy the very darkness in this you breath
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On Thursday, May 1, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
Very lovely... yes... must say, tho... a lovely Mistress once put it perfectly... "I would never harm you... hurt, yes, but harm, never. There's worlds of difference between hurt and harm." Good write.
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
It's like looking into the mind of a serial killer, or even just a demented thought in a regulars joes mind. I like fishes word arcane. love and hate.. life and death.
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
Got chills! Very sensual indeed.. perfectly naughty in every way. Great work
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A former member wrote:
VERY sensual, passionate. Good write :)
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
arcane and black. well written, sensual...
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A former member wrote:
wicked. i especially like the words that stand alone.i feel the same way sometimes-but sometimes i want to be that slave
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