city.park [at sundown]

By Six-Out

.take.

.takethepowerback.
we scream like gods in the sea.
the taste of opium in the air
like soma stars and an urge
to rage.

and I know I'm not a saint
in this pit. - like a bullet in the head
I'm drifting. feet from the ground.
tonight.

I feel.

and they chant. [fuckyou]
as we jump for ourselves- and bleed
our souls. one.more.time.

feed this instance.
and

worship-
the music.

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Published on Saturday, October 27, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "city.park [at sundown]"

On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, jonLyndon (113) wrote:

"the taste of opium in the air " v. well observed & written...
On Wednesday, January 13, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343) wrote:

The surge of your imagery,sweeps me off my feet in a powerful wave.Thanks for the read. Keep the oceans turning.And this reminds me of my concert experiences,and worded so well.Cheers.
A former member wrote: this reminds me of a book i've read... :)
On Saturday, November 28, 2009, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Kirk's comment led me here...Cracking write and tribute.
On Wednesday, January 9, 2008, Dei (663) wrote:

nice little tribute to the Rage.
On Saturday, December 22, 2007, italianbella (183) wrote:

you write with so much power in everything you write about so much strength and emotion in everything ive read of youres so far you are truely an amazing writer
On Tuesday, December 11, 2007, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

i saw them at an outdor venue also ... they blew my brains out ... this was the most pleasant reminder .. thanks man ... great piece .. funguy
A former member wrote: You inspire me to want to L-E-A-R-N to write. Teach me?
On Sunday, November 11, 2007, PoeticHellion (191) wrote:

marry me?
A former member wrote: wow quite a different turn then expected from the title. The first stanza really caught my eye. The Smell of Opium in the Air. My body wen through a withdraw when I read those words and I smelt the faint smell. Live on...Rock On...Worship Music???? ][ ][
On Sunday, October 28, 2007, Mari (419) wrote:

nice.
On Saturday, October 27, 2007, Lynaes (854) wrote:

"We scream like gods in the sea." What I like about this is that is has power behind it, in so few words. Nice work.