Stained Lips Speak Silence

By Mylissa

I thread his lips…

to crawl under the
skin of his ghostly consent.
Branding useless the words of tomorrow.

Now this moment is forever.

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Published on Wednesday, June 27, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Stained Lips Speak Silence"

On Sunday, January 13, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212) wrote:

oooh...that last line is absolutely chilling, in the best way imaginable.
On Tuesday, July 10, 2007, unspeakable truth (94) wrote:

Lustful, with traces of pain, the good kind...oops ;) A few lines, this vivid imagination is set of fire. Beautifully done.
On Friday, July 6, 2007, Tonights Decision (132) wrote:

this feeling.. of being lost in the moment, is so truly felt..
A former member wrote: I can't even describe the feelings I get from reading your words.
On Thursday, June 28, 2007, stormtalk (727) wrote:

you phantasmal bedbug
On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Tania (192) wrote:

(Thank you) and reading works like this has been missed :) deep and sensual undertones.. like tainted whispers.love it.
On Thursday, June 28, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Mmmmm...erotic hauntings. Heavy weight poetics carefully weighted in minimal choice words. =) -Carl
On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Couldn't help but sense the erotic undertones here. Like sewing lips shut, when words might just get in the way of a good time. "Now this moment is forever." Write the hell on.
On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, glasshouse (530) wrote:

Short but powerful. I love writes like these. Your words have obviously been chosen carefully. And well. I'll return to this more than once, i'm sure. Well done. --Jes
On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, blue (1409) wrote:

divine momentary reason. hai. ~b
A former member wrote: Well it sure doesn't always take much to make a point. This was like one of those fleeting little moments of enlightenment. Very Nice.
A former member wrote: the title reeled me in...short and poignant.Loved it!
A former member wrote: o_O Crazy stalker killer you!!!! lol... jk...........josh
A former member wrote: "Branding useless the words of tomorrow." A provocative & profound line. "Stained Lips..." is almost horrifying, & perhaps if I read it under a nombre luna llena (i hope my Spanish is accurate here): if I think on it, taste it deeper, perchance it'll...
On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, Err0r (358) wrote:

The littlest words said, mean the most in so many cases. This is one of them. Beautifully Scripted hun.
A former member wrote: Short on words, but heavy on meaning and beauty. I love the way the images play across my eyelashes, like forbidden kisses stolen in the darkness of midnight hours. Excellent. ~*Beth*~
On Wednesday, June 27, 2007, torn_beauty (77) wrote:

intense. and short.