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Who Will I Be
By cre
Who will I be
When you're through with me
Yesterday I played
But tonight I think I've paid
With my soul . . .
Have I made you whole?
Did you find what you need
Somewhere inside of me
Did you mend your heart
By tearing me apart
Who will I be
When you've finally set me free
Yesterday I smiled
But you were watching all the while
Just waiting for your chance
To take away my dance
And make me cry your tears
And fill me with your fears
Did you find success
In making me less
I hope it brought you joy
Making me your toy
I wonder who I'll be
When you're tired of hurting me
Will I keep your definitions
And be what you envisioned
Your perfect puppetry
Some half-assed parody
Of a life that would have been
If it weren't for your sin
I wonder who I'll be
If ever I am me.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Tuesday, March 25, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Who Will I Be"
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On Sunday, December 30, 2007, Niemand
(361)
wrote:
This one hit me hard... I ask myself this quiete often...-Gin
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A former member wrote:
I've asked myself this maybe three times. One answer always came back. Nothing. Well, that's just me.
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
it sounds like a rap. only, yknow, GOOD. like you have to read it fast but still get the flow right and... im not making any sense. lets just say i love it. -B
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On Thursday, April 3, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
i can relate on this one...every single day i wonder that 2...maybe we'll know the answer someday soon...nicely done as always.
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A former member wrote:
I can't quite comprehend all of Fish's statement, but it seems to say better than I can, so ditto.
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On Wednesday, March 26, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
intertwined, souls dancing, unwilling, twisting, not quite shining, tangled with nowhere better to be.
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A former member wrote:
that was a real good poem. i like the structure and style of it. nicely done. :)
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Here's your damn comment. That was good. :[
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