Fuck you. (an ode to love)

By stuart_pid

Fuck you
for what you do.
For all the pain you put me through.
For every ounce of energy
pretending we were meant to be.
For every wasted day
awaiting changes with despondency.
For endless days
and restless nights.
For long and loud obnoxious fights.
For all you say.
Your wicked ways.
For twisted games you make me play.
For dirty secrets,
silent treatments.
Every known, exploited weakness.
All the lies
and useless cries.
The frigid look behind your eyes.
The rage inside
I couldn't hide.
I swear to god I really tried.
But still I love you
tried and true.
From inside, outside,
through and through.
I don't know why but this I do,
I always will
so fuck me too.

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Published on Friday, September 10, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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March 13th, 2010

Comments on "Fuck you. (an ode to love)"

On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Cattarax (216) wrote:

This has been on my faves list for a long time now and still I agree with every single word!! Thank you for leaving it here!!
On Tuesday, January 3, 2012, FadedBlues (2168) wrote:

I always liked this one...enticing beginning...the perfect ending... bitter, but a pleasure to read. (and the hidden message in your name: without art, all that's left is stupid.)
On Tuesday, February 22, 2011, Ashteroth (192) wrote:

Lol I had to come back and read this again... I love it :) I'm gonna show some of my friends this piece ~Ash
On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, SulaMoon (67) wrote:

WOW!!!! I couldn't have said it better myself! I have to bookmark this one! Thank you :)
A former member wrote: this is exactly where i am in life right now. Thanks for putting this into words.
On Sunday, September 26, 2010, Ashteroth (192) wrote:

That was really enjoyable to read and I think u have captured this sentiment just perfectly :) Thaks for the read ~Ash
A former member wrote: This is fucking awesome!!!! Definately a favorite of mine... Write on!!! ;)
On Thursday, April 8, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (177) wrote:

This Is AMAZING. The flow drags you in and makes you love it all the more.
A former member wrote: i have no words to explain the extent of awesome reached by this poem. it moved me
On Tuesday, March 23, 2010, scarletara (58) wrote:

Love! Love! Love! Excellent read! Perfect ending! Totally applies to my life as well... so fuck me, too.
On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193) wrote:

The perfect poem. Well deserving of the poem of the Day it received. We really have no one but ourselves to blame...now do we? Damn the heart blinded by emotion!! And fuck me too.
On Saturday, March 13, 2010, punk mc cool (75) wrote:

waoh bro great write.........loved it :D
A former member wrote: very well structured, every sentence hits you like a punch in the face, and a great way to finish.
A former member wrote: ahh so amazing and sad and angering. i love it.
A former member wrote: Nice work! Straight up and deep. Well thought out and yes i can relate to it myself. I like the ending it displays honesty.
On Saturday, March 13, 2010, Rowan (202) wrote:

This is brilliant!
On Saturday, March 13, 2010, HeadpatSlut (259) wrote:

Hmm, yeah, I pretty much have to agree with the rest of them on this one it's great. I really liked the first ten lines, they seem to hit the spot in my heart where memories occur, the instability of Love. I give it a Ten.
A former member wrote: Oh my God. This poem was EPIC. Its clever and the flow was wonderful. Awesome write.
On Sunday, September 23, 2007, DoctorAsh (373) wrote:

Ahh, the great tale of consequence .. standing upon the teeder-todder of emotion, where the reward of happiness slightly out-wieghs the outcome of saddness. From this - is where a sliver of love is kept. Tremendous write. Daniel
On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, Jaded Ireland (26) wrote:

This was a really good write and I can relate.
On Monday, March 27, 2006, Chimauron (87) wrote:

See, I wonder why I can't say it this way... but no, I have to be all artsy with it. There is an undeniable element of rage in your work. Very nice.
A former member wrote: Damn man the flow in this was incredible. I know these feelings well. Very awsome write. ~Ship!
On Wednesday, November 9, 2005, Elegant Kiss (182) wrote:

'I swear to god I really tried.'... I miss you, Ken. I miss you like woah.
On Monday, April 25, 2005, AniDayz (820) wrote:

ahhh...fucking rockin'...flows all in and out...remarkable[!]
On Thursday, December 30, 2004, blue (1454) wrote:

lol...I loved it! great ending too...~b
A former member wrote: Damn. I know how you feel, I went through that not too long ago. I'm deffinately adding this to my favorites.
A former member wrote: This had such a bitter feel to it that I find very familiar and I can completely relate to the ending. Awsome write:p ~Ship!
On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Lotophagi (333) wrote:

This is awesome, I love the rhythm and the power in it, it reads like a frantic list in my mind, angry and demanding, but at the same time almost seeking and begging..... excellent write. Thank you.
On Thursday, September 23, 2004, AbjectColloquialist (32) wrote:

Bing! She got served, yo! Good stuff.
On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

I liked this!
On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Jonas (720) wrote:

i bet you're a pumpkins fan, huh?