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Solidarity Stands Alone
By zanewill
since when my ancient
sister
did you become the
keeper
of my secrets?
spouting words of madness
into the face of
those with eyes already
stoned
without unity
we are doomed
within the hearts of the
familiar we are exposed
other fears escalate
alone-
ness
will snuff out our
love
light
extinguish the one
selfish necessity we all need:
each other
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© 2008 zanewill
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On Friday, June 13, 2008, Bluegirl
(177)
wrote:
Thoes last two lines are something that seems so obvious, yet it gets taken for granted far too often. Nice write.
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On Thursday, May 8, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
aching and insightful piece... if only we could be open without fear... well done
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A former member wrote:
the paradox of being with... ? "doomed within the hearts of the familiar"... seeking out others for selfish reasons? interesting underpinnings of love and self here. uniquely expressed!
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, TheUltimateOutlaw
(44) wrote:
That was, like, mind-shattering awesomeness. I adored it.
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I'm freaked by this. It speaks to me like a summon. And you should be honored by blue's comment. wow, wow
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, blue
(1454) wrote:
this.. is poetry.
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
utterly beautiful. such pain in standing alone, yet we push ourselves there still. very nice write *cheers* ~ta
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