Comments by Elise
- "Nice flow, that was well written ^_^ The last line seemed the strongest, a great way to end it."
Posted by Elise on "Who I Am" by Eladrim
- "I love the comparison between you and the rope, such perfect meaning. Great write."
Posted by Elise on "You" by Eladrim
- "Very nice write, I love your work. About time you got online and posted something. You've been missed. (Or I have bad timing?)"
Posted by Elise on "Tangible Lies" by Rachel
- "Thats very heartbrokenly written. The last lines powerful, full of meaning. I like this a lot."
Posted by Elise on "My Last Wish" by Eladrim
- "This has a nice flow..I would like to think that some good will come of this."
Posted by Elise on "Fate" by Eladrim
- "This is so sad *hugs tight* I hope that day will come soon, not knowing is way too hard. You're not, not good enough for anyone. Great write."
Posted by Elise on "happy and broken" by darkdesires
- "For someone new at this, you'd never know by reading your works. Someone has hurt you to the point where they can't get in anymore, powerful."
Posted by Elise on "Ice" by Eladrim
- "Awesomeness, corrupt away..it must be done! ^_~ Sounds like a fun activity. Corrupt over and over, tease mauahaha..opps. Carried away "
Posted by Elise on "My Sweet Virgin" by SilverPagan
- "Haha, I've not been beaten up, but have been in a fight. That was 4th grade, I won. Thanx for sharing though..that was awesome. We were born the same year too! ^_^"
Posted by Elise on "About Me Survey" by SilverPagan
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