Dream Date

By Dommi

I put on all my makeup
And wore my hair up nice
Just so you'd find me beautiful
When we went out last night

My shy and trembling hand
Reached over and sought yours
They entangled into one
And I knew I wanted more

So I looked up at your eyes
And you quickly turned away
What is it that you musn't see?
What are you afraid to say?

I hastily took back my hand
And I placed it in my pocket
You asked me if I got your note
And I simply said I lost it

But I knew the one you spoke of
The one where 'we couldn't be'
That said you were too afraid
Of ever losing me

I brought you down beneath the bridge
To talk and sort things out
I kissed your cheek and undid your pants
And watched it all hang out

And of course you grew too nervous
And tried to move away
So I smashed a rock into your head
You will be mine today

I began to have my fun
And I forgot about the note
And in case you regained consciousness
I held a switchblade at your throat

As footsteps began approaching
I dragged you away with me
And hid you in a thicket
So no one else would see

I began my long walk home
And smiled to myself
The things that I had tasted
Would be worth the trip to hell

Straightening my shirt
I quietly stepped inside
My mother asked me how it went
I grinned and I replied:

"I left him with an impression
And I know he won't forget
And should he get the wrong idea
I remember where he lives."

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Copyright 2004 Dommi Of Baphomet
Published on Sunday, September 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i love this, this is how my dream date would go, or how any date would have to go for me :-(

  • A former member wrote: haha this is awesome

  • Poetaster On Monday, April 3, 2006, Poetaster (12)By person wrote:

    Mmmmm... I'd crush your skull and slurp grey matter off your face. Sweet madness, just a taste.

  • Serenity On Monday, May 23, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Damn! This is awesome!

  • Elise On Monday, May 23, 2005, Elise (188)By person wrote:

    Omg, Dommi..this was awesome! I loved it ^_^

  • Trail of Fiends On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Trail of Fiends (37)By person wrote:

    Awsome. Condifence and evilish, great elements.

  • A former member wrote: .... thats possibly the coolest thing i've read in a long time HAH great write

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Thursday, February 17, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    Hah. Nice. Very nice. Bastard had it coming to him. ;)

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