Dream Date
By Dommi
I put on all my makeup
And wore my hair up nice
Just so you'd find me beautiful
When we went out last night
My shy and trembling hand
Reached over and sought yours
They entangled into one
And I knew I wanted more
So I looked up at your eyes
And you quickly turned away
What is it that you musn't see?
What are you afraid to say?
I hastily took back my hand
And I placed it in my pocket
You asked me if I got your note
And I simply said I lost it
But I knew the one you spoke of
The one where 'we couldn't be'
That said you were too afraid
Of ever losing me
I brought you down beneath the bridge
To talk and sort things out
I kissed your cheek and undid your pants
And watched it all hang out
And of course you grew too nervous
And tried to move away
So I smashed a rock into your head
You will be mine today
I began to have my fun
And I forgot about the note
And in case you regained consciousness
I held a switchblade at your throat
As footsteps began approaching
I dragged you away with me
And hid you in a thicket
So no one else would see
I began my long walk home
And smiled to myself
The things that I had tasted
Would be worth the trip to hell
Straightening my shirt
I quietly stepped inside
My mother asked me how it went
I grinned and I replied:
"I left him with an impression
And I know he won't forget
And should he get the wrong idea
I remember where he lives."
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Comments on "Dream Date"
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A former member wrote:
i love this, this is how my dream date would go, or how any date would have to go for me :-(
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A former member wrote:
haha this is awesome
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On Monday, April 3, 2006, Poetaster
(12) wrote:
Mmmmm... I'd crush your skull and slurp grey matter off your face. Sweet madness, just a taste.
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On Monday, May 23, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Damn! This is awesome!
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On Monday, May 23, 2005, Elise
(187) wrote:
Omg, Dommi..this was awesome! I loved it ^_^
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Trail of Fiends
(37) wrote:
Awsome. Condifence and evilish, great elements.
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A former member wrote:
.... thats possibly the coolest thing i've read in a long time HAH great write
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Hah. Nice. Very nice. Bastard had it coming to him. ;)