Memories

By Eladrim

So much time has gone by that
I don't even know where to start
Sorting through all these feelings,
The tangled mess, a mixture of hope and despair.

The only thing left to do
Is to turn my back now,
And just walk away
From all of these haunting memories...

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Copyright 2005 Eladrim
Published on Monday, May 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Aunty Depressant On Saturday, April 7, 2007, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    I have boxes of pictures I can't go through, and cringe when other women want me to join scrapbooking groups. I just hide them under my bed. Still a bit too raw. They bring back the feelings.

  • A former member wrote: Its an illusion we all have and want.. to just escape and be numb, forget the painful memories.. we all like to pretend, but it never disapears... I much like it, although I advise a thesaurus, I do the same in repeating words, and there are so many..

  • A former member wrote: Simple cliffhanger..incompleteness..

  • Elise On Tuesday, May 10, 2005, Elise (188)By person wrote:

    The memories hold so much, such a true writing.

  • A former member wrote: 'a mixture of hope and despair' describes it so well. great job

  • Serenity On Monday, May 9, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Lovely write! I love your work :)

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