It's All Your Fault

By Eladrim

Don't wonder why noone's there.

Don't wonder why I don't care.

Don't wonder at how far you fall.

Don't wonder at the slience when you call.

Cause now your pain's too much to bare,
And you're drowning in a pool of your own despair.

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Copyright 2005 Eladrim
Published on Monday, May 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: It's angry.. short and with feeling. I much love it. - Salem

  • Elise On Monday, May 9, 2005, Elise (188)By person wrote:

    Wow, short and to the point. Kick ass, tell them! ^_^

  • Forgotten Angel On Monday, May 9, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    i like this! i should show this to the ppl i hate most..and to all the ppl that hurt me, that havent spoken a word..some ppl r ok..but wow..great work! -Kel

  • Eladrim On Monday, May 9, 2005, Eladrim (47)By person wrote:

    I agree completely, it's the ones that hurt you and walk away without a word that hurt you the most

  • A former member wrote: Too true, Eladrim...

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