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happy and broken
By darkdesires
Blessing my dreams and touching my heart
We were once together, but now apart
Tear the sin from my body to make me clean
To make it beautiful, but only for your eyes to be seen
Wrestle the demon inside my head
Lay it to rest so no blood is sheed
Updigging the truth and showing it all
Build me up strong so you won't fall
Today is the day where I make my stand
What I make is for you so take it in your hand
Care for it and cheerish it forver
I can help make you happy when we're together
Not until I am made anew
Happy with myself and good enough for you
All it takes is just a little time
Maybe when its done we can call each other mine
So until that happy day stay by me
I'll find myself and we can both try to be
Be has one like it should of been from the start
In each other's arms we'll never part
All these words were only in vain... the love and feelings once had just
a shadow now. maybe one day I'll have her back maybe one day I'll know
I never will. until that day I may look happy, but inside its all the
same... a broken mess just trying to be fixed.
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Copyright 2005 darkdesires
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On Monday, January 31, 2011, Ladyhawke
(394)
wrote:
That was so beautifully written! It was amazing. It flowed so smoothly and easy to read. Write on;)
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2010, PassionateDarkDesire
(28) wrote:
Btw...I'm sorry.
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On Wednesday, September 30, 2009, PassionateDarkDesire
(28) wrote:
...wow...i read this too close to the situation.....
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On Friday, August 17, 2007, Dark Wing
(51) wrote:
sometimes we all need be be fixed, but that is what friends are for. Good Work! ~crow
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A former member wrote:
I'll fix u any day...((((hug)))
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On Friday, April 21, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty
(29) wrote:
let me fix you
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On Saturday, January 28, 2006, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I hope you get the love you deserve to have, one thats corresponded and cherished. Good one!
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A former member wrote:
Beautifull...
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On Saturday, May 21, 2005, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
Very lovely, I feel like I miss some one that I don't have.
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A former member wrote:
this is the poem you wrote for me, just with a different ending
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A former member wrote:
I love this poem! Very beautiful! Real passion lies in the words, rather in the actions.
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Eladrim
(47) wrote:
i feel you 100 percent, not knowing is a torture because it's human nature to hold on to the smallest bit of hope with the most inhuman of strength
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
I'm still on a 'wow, your back' kick..lol..anyways love the write, very emotional and i can relate
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
This is so sad *hugs tight* I hope that day will come soon, not knowing is way too hard. You're not, not good enough for anyone. Great write.
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