Brevity

By wandering druid

Standing here, alone, apart
From everything I’d ever want
Is killing me slowly carving away
At my passions month after month
Hacking inspiration to pieces
As my pen freezes
A winter without the shifting of seasons
The closing of creativity’s tomb

As red flowers bloom
Just before the first frost,
Such a horrible loss
That brevity costs
Like when a child exits the womb
And begins to die
Such a limited time
One has to live
And the love one can give
And creativity’s breath
Before the ending of rhymes

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Copyright 2005 onelastbreath
Published on Tuesday, April 12, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • ApathysKiss On Thursday, August 25, 2005, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    i made no mistake making you a fav...your works are a breath of fresh air and i'm glad i haven't finished going through them. =) respeto mucho ~michelle

  • Dei On Thursday, April 14, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    your very talented. DP mail me sometime.

  • Elise On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, Elise (187)By person wrote:

    Yes, agreed..you should stick around so we can see more of your work.

  • avlar On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, avlar (24)By person wrote:

    yes. definitely get a membership

  • Serenity On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    This is wonderful and I agree with Poptart. Your writing is wonderful

  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, April 12, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    I think you should get a membership, i like your writing, and I think you would do well here. -Tart-

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