Puzzle pieced together (Mature content)

By darkdesires

The strength in me died that night.
I can’t get it out of my head how he is better than me.
Why am I so inferior, but made out to be better?
Does that even make sense? Is it even possible.
He tilts his head back and screams out a frustrated roar taking the dagger pressing the side of it on his chest and pulling at it.
Letting the length of the blade cut through my skin releasing the blood.
I can’t stand this.
I need to be better.
I need to rip off my jaw, tear off my shoulders, and make myself stronger.
I can’t fix these things with anything of this world.
So I’ll fix it with my knife.
Cut it out and make myself perfect for you.
Just rip me apart and piece me together like your favorite puzzle.
I live for you and die for you, so please… kill me softly and arrange me the way you want.

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Copyright 2005 darkdesires
Published on Thursday, March 24, 2005.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, January 29, 2016, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    I can feel myself connecting to more of these lines than I care to admit, wanting to be everything to someone who is your everything.

  • technicolour-girl On Saturday, December 20, 2008, technicolour-girl (22)By person wrote:

    nice work

  • A former member wrote: I think that this is the best out of all of your poerty I've read so far

  • Hello Dead Kitty On Friday, April 21, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty (29)By person wrote:

    you are already pieced well enough together...remember that

  • PoeticHellion On Monday, March 13, 2006, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Extremely well written. I could feel the pain over here.

  • A former member wrote: I can smell, taste the torment.. ravenous, lustful, creatively spun, yet so very pained.. I have not only felt these words, but felt love killing me slowly.. well executed.

  • A former member wrote: it's good...

  • Elise On Tuesday, May 3, 2005, Elise (188)By person wrote:

    Ouch, so painful. Great write *holds self together*

  • A former member wrote: "rip me apart and piece me together like your favorite puzzle...arrange me the way you want"-I love this!!!

  • A former member wrote: Beauty speaks through work, i can now see that cleary thanx to you.

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 24, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    oh ouch...this cuts me very deep, but i love it at the same time..

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