Wasted on You

By Eladrim

So now you know that you can't take it.

Tell me, how long will you fake it?

Because noone's near, you're full of fear.

You ripped my heart out, made me waste my tears.

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Copyright 2005 Eladrim
Published on Monday, May 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Again I much love it... You have many different ways of expressing yourself..amazing how poetry can relate two people and mean so much...can't say a word correct but can write a million words in perfection. -Salem

  • Elise On Tuesday, May 10, 2005, Elise (187)By person wrote:

    They should feel something for the heartache they've given to you. Nice.

  • elisa On Monday, May 9, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    there are few things that can not be stolen.....and that makes them precious~elisa

  • Eladrim On Monday, May 9, 2005, Eladrim (47)By person wrote:

    hmm what do you mean?

  • LovelyAssassinx On Monday, May 9, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (151)By person wrote:

    Nice. Short and full of emotion. ~Unlucky

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