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A Life of Pain
By Eladrim
All the walls are coming in,
You can see it can't you.
You can't find strength withing,
You look around and friends are few.
You fight but just can't win,
You always get shut down.
Your mind breaks, depression walks in,
You try but can no longer hide the frown.
They say that it's just part of life,
But you cannot admit it.
Because if pain is a part of life,
Then to escape the pain you must escape the life...
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Copyright 2005 Eladrim
Published on Sunday, May 8, 2005.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Again, beautful.. the last line may be seem true. it is true life is pain, but death is not the only way... From another angle, we also never remove all of the pain.. so it be true, sadly. I much like it. - Salem
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On Sunday, May 15, 2005, Serenity
(469)
wrote:
"Because if pain is a part of life, Then to escape the pain you must escape the life..." I admit this haunts me a bit
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wow! This is too awesome. Keep it up :)
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
true, keep up the good writes
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD
(45) wrote:
BA--ZING!!! you hit that on the spot!! pain is life? Genious! Great write... ~~~WELCOME TO DP~~~ -Roarke
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Eladrim
(47) wrote:
thank you for the welcome, yes i figured everybody can understand how life is pain, if not they're lying to themselves
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
Wow, I like the rythm, but very nicely written. Welcome to DarkPoetry.
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, Eladrim
(47) wrote:
Thank you, that's what I was attempting to convey
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On Sunday, May 8, 2005, Eladrim
(47) wrote:
The Crimson Queen- trying to improve my writing, what thoughts does it provoke? (anyone know why it won't let me reply?)
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On Monday, May 9, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
just that last line makes you think about life and pain and how so many try to escape but fail..ya know?
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On Sunday, May 8, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
thought provoking piece..wonderful! and welcome to the DP family
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