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Who I Am
By Eladrim
This is dedicated to Serenity ^_^
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I look around and all I see,
Are angry faces staring back at me.
These are my friends that I've hurt,
I can't believe how I treated them like dirt.
I said all the things I didn't mean,
Everything cruel, rude and obscene.
Time and time I get this way,
I can't control what I do or say.
So now I ask, "Why even try?"
As I gaze unseeing at the sky.
"Why fight who I am?
I try to resist but never can!
I scream in your face, 'I'll never bow!'
But the real question is how?
You see it's quite impossible for me,
Because the truth is i'm already on my knees..."
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Copyright 2005 Eladrim
Published on Friday, May 13, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, August 21, 2017, worm
(1194)
wrote:
come write more...
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On Monday, March 21, 2016, Serenity
(469) wrote:
I miss you dearly
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A former member wrote:
Wow. I love all but the treating like dirt. Sorry, I value dirt a lot, as a piece of nature, and it was also worth alot in trading times before money. Just doesn't fit, to me...
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A former member wrote:
Other than that I love it. I feel like this sometimes, and imagine one friend who might. Lovely as always. I much like it. -Salem
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A former member wrote:
short but good... and the last line brought it out really well
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Elise
(188) wrote:
Nice flow, that was well written ^_^ The last line seemed the strongest, a great way to end it.
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A former member wrote:
WOW VERY POETIC AND DEEP I LIKE AWESOME WRITE!!!!!!!
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On Friday, May 13, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
awww!! thats so cute! i love how ppl dedicate poems to ppl..it so sweet..i'll have 2 try it :P anway..great write! -Kel
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A former member wrote:
deep man... i like it
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On Friday, May 13, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Hehe ::Hugs tight:: :)
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On Friday, May 13, 2005, Eladrim
(47) wrote:
::hugs back tighter::^_^
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